"The Hogwarts chapter of the Order pretty much just consists of you and me at the moment, and I assure you, I don't need another master – or mistress. Two is quite enough."

Lol, my dude. You're about to get one, before long.
I love the discussions between Minerva and Snape.

This story is everything. I absolutely love your Poppy and Snape. The matchmaking portraits! I love it all.

How did Snape find out where Hufflepuff's cup was in the few weeks between chapter 30 and chapter 33? He was clueless that Hufflepuff's cup wasn't in Hogwarts - otherwise he would have ruled out Hufflepuff as an option when he suggested the Horcrux could be Hufflepuff's after he and Hermione went into the Room of Requirements. But in chapter 33 he is telling everybody that he knows where Hufflepuff's cup is, and in chapter 35 we find out he knows it's located in the Lestranges vault.

Hi, just wanted to say that I randomly heard you’re writing another long story. I created this account so I would be notified. Back when I read Chasing the Sun I remember I couldn’t stop reading, it was so good. I have read a lot of other works, but this one will always be special for me. Hope you’re doing great.

What caused Narcissa and Bellatrix to switch views with each other in the AU? In Canon it was Bellatrix who was the reluctant one, precisely because she didn't trust Snape at all, while it was Narcissa who was begging to do the unbreakable vow with Snape. Peter Pettigrew was nowhere to be found in Canon, why is he here in this AU?

Snape speaks like an American

Excellent

sorry, i just finished the chapter. thank you for having Hermione do what's right

why didn't Hermione stand up for Severus? he stands up for her, but she allows them to hurt snape. i thought she was a better person

Hope dumbledore is being chase in the after life by a piss of james in animagus form with lily in his back with a stick as choosen weapon

Selfish old man no telling them and by this making morr ñong the war and leaving more people to death

I’m trying hard to get through this, but it’s really difficult. This fic was recommended and I had high hopes. The dialogue isn’t great. Most of the time, it is hard to read. The characters don’t sound like their characters and there’s no distinction between their voices. Snape and Hermione should not sound the same and use the same language. It makes it obvious that it is the writer’s voice speaking for everyone. Changes are made that would impact that real story and it would make zero sense for the same outcome to have played out with these changes being made. Now I’m only on chapter 18, but I don’t think I’m going to make it to the end with the weird references to expressions that these characters would never say. “All is fair in love and war” “revenge is a dish best served cold”….. I mean. Come on. There’s also 90 percent inner monologue the entire time and no imagery. It sounds like the story could be a good one but the writing is just not there.

amazing loved rereading it third time

writing skills are impressive

I am re-reading this story at least once a year. It has become my winter tradition. I am incredibly thankful for the stories you post and you can not imagine how loud i squealed when i saw, that you posted that you plan to publish another long story. Have the best christmas time and can’t wait to read the new story! 3