Reviews for Come Undone
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
Wow, loved this.
mcdde5Heno chapter 1 . 6/6/2015
Loved this story too! I loved when they brought Lucifer in to the show. I don't think they could have found anyone better to play him. Thanks for sharing!
criminalxxxmindsxxxfreak chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
There aren't even words to describe how amazing this is. I don't know what it was, but the way you captured Sam's inner thoughts and the way he was feeling was just awesome. I loved this to pieces, really fantastic job!
CeCe Away chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Poor guy. I really do wonder what show has in mind with the cut hand. I like your version of it being Lucifer's mark.
BranchSuper chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Good story.
judyann chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Wow loved that. OMG I never even thought about the hand. Great little story!
cookjar chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Great start. Poor Sammy. I too was wondering why they made such a point of Sam's hand being cut. I wonder if that will ever be explained. Can't wait to read more.
twomom chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Great job on a missing scene! Thoroughly enjoyed!
Jane88 chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
That was a great tag, thanks! You captured Lucifer just right, he gave me the creeps. I wondered about the cut as well, nice idea. Poor Sam, can't wait for next weeks episode! Well done!
SPN Mum chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Ooooohh! You gave me goosebumps reading this! O.o That would be exactly the type of things Lucifer would say to Sam! Even if Lucifer is still in the cage and Sam isn't, Sam's mind knows Lucifer so well that it would make him say those things. I can see where Sam would have a terrible time knowing what's real and what isn't. I bet that cut on his hand WILL be a factor in the next ep. Great job! :)
spnMom chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Awwww, why does this say Complete? Don't you feel like writing about 10 more chapters for it... Maybe 15 :-) Please.

This was great. Waiting another week to find out what is going to happen is killing me. Loved the premiere! I really appreciate you giving us another little peek at it.
Toushirou-chan chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Very good... and angsty. Poor Sam. When he got that hallucination from Lucifer (that was done in such a good way that I wasn't really sure at first whether it even WAS a hallucination *shudder*) and wasn't able to tell whether it was a hallucination or not, I was like: "Oh my god, this can't be... shit, poor Sam...this is not true... it's not" I was in shock and in fact I still am. Though I still believe it's true that Sam got out, the episode has managed to make me doubt things...(after all, Sam doesn't know about Cas being a Leviathan yet).

Gods, Sam is good at making his hallucinations seem horrifyingly real. And the director's really good at showing how hallucinations can break one down. And you too, of course, this was really authentic in my eyes!

Good theory with Sams injury being Lucifer's mark- I swear it made a shiver ran down my spine... *shudder*