Okay Im tired of seeing Naruto being played like fiddle. I dunno what you were trying to achieve but reading from MCs pov its vexing and leaves a bad taste in my mouth. It doesn't feel as if this is her flirting but its like he is being toyed with.

Also why does it feel like we have reached the underdog saga arc here in the later half of this work. If you want to write and show mc as underdogthe beginning is where you should do it. Not here in the later half the fic, where we should truly see our mc shine. But almost all last chapters are like that with our mc being just the second guy in the room never first. While minato, jiraya are understandable since they are of earlier generation and his senior. But what is with Itachi and Mei showing him his place, shouldn't them being in his generation allows for our mc to, if not trump then atleast be able to stand par with them. But this is not it. We are multiple arcs in, but it feels like we are on to a training arc, after mc gets shown his place and we get the underdog arc where we see ou mc shining and trying and achieving to top them after multiple chapter of gritty training. And if thats what you were trying to achieve then later half of the work in not the place for it.

PS. Also if its some bs like him being too young to then remember Minato was somewhere in similar age range when he achieved his moniker.

The more I read the more frustrated I become. I didn't wanted the mc to be macho embodiment or orochimaru v 2.0 but atleast someone I can root for. Mc is forced to do something which he does without even token complaint. And it leaves me irritated when reading it especially since he too seems to hate it in his monologue. Either make him grow a spine or make it seem that he likes the decision in his monologue. Because this is not a mc that I can connect with or root for.

Little by little this story is becoming drag to read. Its like Naruto has no agency at all. At first he had control of his actions and he had plans that were direct opposite of konaha or higher ups. But still he had plans, goal of his own, no matter how wrong they were morally. But now he has no plan he does what is being dekanded of him, and does it even if he doesn't like it(like this scenario). He has become a punching bag that just takes it rather than fighting back.

estuvo muy buena enverad. Se convirtió en una de mis favoritas, me gustaría que si es posible hagas una en donde naruto es uchia y se va a la niebla pa estar cn mei

So basically Your Naruto is a big ass bitch and a “nerd” and some how he ends up with Mei? I don’t understand you at all I only looked for this because i was told it’s the “best” Naruto x Mei story. Waste of my time is what it was

Its became boring. It isnt Narutoverse. This story better to be placed in modern setting. Your heroes outs of their characters and looks like they live in modern time.
And periodic table in ninja world? Serios? Whats a joke!

I was kind of assuming that this fanfic was about Resident Evil X Naruto because there is a chance of Naruto becoming Albert Wesker with the use of his virus Ouroboros which I can easily see surviving destruction from Simply being in a underground lab somewhere in the village of whirlpools or in some other area so that once Naruto was banished or something similar to that he would stumble upon it accidentally break it or something gets consumed by the virus and turns into said Resident Evil villain Albert Wesker but if that's not the case then I'm going to make it myself.

his chapters first half was very VERY uncomfortable like reading the thoughts of a rape victim. The latter half of this chapter was disgusting and embarrassing out of character smut truly fuck this; you can't even trust a 'science' (fucking science) themed fiction to not dedicate 4-5? chapter worth of smutty-lemony-horny content and i haven't even read the other half of this 300k fic, not to mentions no tags about this bullshit nor that many signs of it in the early chapters. truly smut tends to corrupt and absolutely writing any part of it corrupts absolutely. its like im reading a completely different fic

Really enjoying the story so far. You got me real good with the april fools chapter and even better its actually april fools as I read it. Best compliment I can think to give is that the story has been great enough so far that I literally thought ‘well you bought enough good will for me to at least give it a try’. Looming forward to finishing the rest!

That was quite interesting Mei jealous of the Fire Daimyo's daughter. The snakes making a weird outfit for Naruto and lemon all good

Well, damn that was amusing Naruto and Mei I'm surprised there was no lemon still amusing, when did she kiss him on the cheek.

Well, that was amusing making Chojuro seem like a chump because he is, and then Mizukage and Naruto fought interesting and nice that Kimiko is writing to Naruto well she is Naruto's, little sis, I know Anko slept around but if Anko wouldn't have died could they have gotten together as for the whole Sasgay thing well revolting but whatever he's barely even a side character and his existence is irrelevant.

Well, that was quite a welcome to Kiri fighting a tailed beast, seems people will be sickened by Naruto wherever he goes, Gato already taken over Wave huh, surprised the 4th hasn't sent someone to slaughter him, I wonder what happens next.

Well, that was quite amusing, not gonna be a favorite at Ichiraku's lol, but still, it was another nice chapter.

So here enters Mei Terumi, this was not expected, I bet Kimiko won't be happy, also her and Sasgay I hope that doesn't happen I hope the snot-nosed emo shitstain gets the plague and dies PAINFULLY. I wonder what was in the letter, next chapter should be interesting I imagine, Naruto hates Kiri the most and now he has to work there, a strange move his plans will be difficult now.