|Reviews for Frozen|
| ryder21 chapter 8 . 1/7/2013
I just had so much fun reading this. The dialogue told the story all by itself, you have the boys 'voices' down so well. Awesome!
| Alia-x chapter 8 . 5/24/2012
Hahaha this is amazing!
Had me crackin up at every turn!
| Seblainer chapter 8 . 10/28/2011
This is freakin' awesome.
| Woman of Letters chapter 8 . 10/26/2011
You ended this well... hot chocolate, Dean's baby's safe and he gets Sam to call the Impala a "her". Doesn't take much to make Dean happy, does it?
I liked these lines:
"Plus we know how to kill a Yeti in case we ever run into one again."
"Flamethrower! Been trying to add it to the arsenal for years."
"It's a good thing we have a big trunk."
Let's not forget the ski pole.
| Woman of Letters chapter 7 . 10/26/2011
The image of Sam running over Dean on a sled made this story for me. Oh, poor Dean. Almost Yeti kibble, set on fire, and now... pancaked.
My favorite lines were:
"Dude, you got taken out by a sled!"
"I mean a ghetto sled no less!"
| Woman of Letters chapter 6 . 10/26/2011
I always try to pick out the best lines from stories like this. This chapter had a couple of good ones. I was torn between the stick up his ass, the floppy hair and Sam revoking Dean's hetero card. But actually my favorite lines were:
"How did you manage to?"
"Dig you out and save the day?"
"Because I'm awesome."
Just cause I love it when Dean gets all arrogant.
Nice ending though. Yeah, it was cutesy but it's nice to have some feel good moments too.
| Woman of Letters chapter 5 . 10/26/2011
The nice thing about this chapter was the fire at the beginning and the snow at the end. A study in opposites.
You have the boys' voices down pretty well and you write funny dialogue. Telling a story with only dialogue and no exposition is a pretty neat trick.
| Woman of Letters chapter 4 . 10/26/2011
I like your cliffhanger endings. They make the story funnier.
The funniest lines here (the one that I think made this chapter) were:
"You have your damn eyes closed? Why in the hell would you do that when you are chucking a fire bomb towards me!"
"I didn't want to see if I missed."
| Woman of Letters chapter 3 . 10/26/2011
I hope Dean never stops being a smart ass.
The line about "not on the first date" had me in stitches.
Okay, so creating a molotov cocktail while trapped in snow.. a bit of a stretch but I can still see it. Thank God for the boys' love for beer.
| Woman of Letters chapter 2 . 10/26/2011
My favorite part of this chapter was:
"Do you speak Wookie Sam?"
"No Dean they didn't offer Wookie 101 at Stanford."
"Told you college was a waste of time man."
Even when things have gotten so much worse, those two can still take pot shots at each other.
| Woman of Letters chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
I love the way you set up the whole situation by making us think it was one thing (even though you said there was no Wincest) and then bringing it a full 180 into a completely different picture. The dialogue was funny, true to the characters, and clear. I never had to wonder who was speaking. Good work!
| smalld1171 chapter 8 . 10/13/2011
YAY! Great ending my friend!
"Only if geriatric shoes and walkers do it for you." - super funny! :D
"Didn't have deep fry a Yeti on my bucket list." - awesome line!
"Got hot chocolate, got my baby and got you to call my baby a her. Yeah, it's a good day." - cute AND funny!
Becky, you must delve into the world of dialogue stories again, you did an excellent job! Thanks for the great story and for all the giggles! :D
| smalld1171 chapter 7 . 10/13/2011
LOLOLOL! LOVE this! I definitely had a picture in my mind of Dean being run over by his OWN sled! Hilarious stuff my friend! EXCELLENT, thanks for the giggle! :D
| ccase13 chapter 8 . 10/12/2011
Tnis is a good end. Dean did get Sam back to civilization and he got hot chocolate. I'm sure the Impala is pleased Sam didn't call her an it for once at least.
| spootycup chapter 8 . 10/12/2011
Thanks for the fun Ride (my mommy enjoyed it a lot she laughed so hard at one part she had tears)...