Reviews for Stroke of Pain
snailboat64 chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
have to say, not as good as the one from Chance's POV. I think it has to do with the pacing. Guerrero reached feverpitch too fast, so you kind of had nowhere else to go.

I think it would have worked better (for me anyway) if he didn't cut himself until must closer to the end.

Also (and I'm niggling here) but in Chance's POV it stated that Guerrero had slept in Chance's bed, and here it says it was a guest bed.

Still a good read though! Kudos.
Ania087 chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Good GOD that was intense LOL. Nicely done
Scarlet Garter chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Not usually my kind of story, but I'm panting anyhow!

Scarlet G