Reviews for Give me your pain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very intriguing story. It begs to be followed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() shit NTR |
![]() ![]() ![]() shit, author completed shit, NTR |
![]() ![]() ![]() fucking i don't ;like this NTR, better deead author, wiht ron shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() fuck what chapter he gonna bang her |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I can understand what Draco's thought about being better than half-bloods and Muggle-borns. And that concept doesn't work w/ Voldemort who wished a domination instead of being excellent wizards like Draco said |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ron was just too much! Just because you saw the Malfoys didn't know family ties doesn't mean they really don't know! Hmph... :( I really like the bond Draco and Hermione had w/ the magic :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() So he has this amazing sex with her and then gets engaged and then has sex with Astoria and then is now back together with Hermione?I get that his good but I think Hermione should have respected herself a bit more. But I'll give Draco the benefit of the clearly just sees this as emotional ties yet?Just a really good physical still to be so frivolous,Just jump around like a slut. No man. And she just takes him back while he just disregards her feelings and then just fuck her and all is forgiven,nah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, I wasn't expecting that twist! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovely chapter, although the grammar devolved in it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the side commentsas much as I love rzzmg- in the middle of the lemons, really pulls me out of the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story. there's a brief A/N in the middle about googling that would be good to remove to keep the flow going |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the magical connection |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice keeping to Canon yet tweaking things |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice, but there is a note to akasha the kitty in the middle of the chapter that pulls me out of the story |