Reviews for Fiercest of Waves |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Would of loved to see something like to of happened. And to see Danny surf. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Danny! This is great writing! I felt what he felt and it was made better by Steve trying to help him. Wow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks so much for this as probably, knowing TV series, Danny's disappointment over the baby may never be addressed. Poor Danny...thank goodness he has Steve and his ohana to go to when he's ready. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so sad, but I am glad Danny finally let Steve help him through it. Very well written. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My heart breaks for Danny. He had everything he'd wanting for so long and then had it all taken away. Hopefully he'll remember that his ohana is there for him. Great job on this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow - thank you for this beautifully written, powerful piece. Danny's grief is palpable and you have excellent use of perfect metaphors. Loved the scene at the end too, and how Steve knew without really knowing what happened. Definitely going into favorites. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! Yes, they need this - If he's denied the leading man heroics of superman Steve - Danny should definitely clean up in the angst stakes. And yeah, get him in the water showing off those surfing skills (er...and body!). A winning combination...thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought that story was just about the crapiest thing TPTBCould have done to Danno. There better be a good storyline reason for it to have happened. You wrote Danno well. I would also like to see him surfing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it. And the title said it all. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Great first chapter and very, very well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, this is the type of stuff we don't get to see on the show but that should really get put in. They don't have to turn it into a soap opera or anything, but in this instance, it would be great to see how this pregnancy thing they pulled out of thin air ended just as abruptly and how the team is there for one of their own in the end. Thanks for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Danny. To have everything he wants offered then snatched away again is so sad. Thanks for writing this. Gee I hope we get to see Danny surf sometime. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww. This was sweet, and sad and very touching. Poor Danny! I love how he uses surfing as a release. Lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! Poor Danny trying not to think about losing his family because it hurts too much... And Steve being stubborn enough to stay there until the time came to have his friend's back. I simply loved it! Take as long as you need in between stories, if this is what you'll be coming back with! Thanks for sharing! |