Reviews for Locked Up
sasusakuclare93 chapter 8 . 11/16
i really hope you could write more to this story, its fascinating and it would be even greater if there were more to the story, like who was the one that haurhi saw leaving while she and kyoya were talking towards the end, tamaki's reaction to it all and the twins reactions. what will happen after she sees kyoya again? please continue, i love how you wrote this story.
weirdo of the century chapter 2 . 8/14
Kyoya stop being creepy it is confusing me.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/25
this chapter is confusing. i mean like from the beginning seemed off like did haruhi just sleep with him (second time ) because she had nothing better to do? Kyoya in this chapter seemed to be too nice and forced. haruhi doesnt seem to think kyoya as nothing more than friends with benefits and a burden. if she doesnt feel the same just write it and not make readers overthink this situation. and lastly, is kyoya gay or something having to choose between haruhi or tamaki? 4/10 in my opinion cant just put smut in it needs more a dynamic twist and a better plot
Guest chapter 8 . 7/25
update soon if you can! Just have to say that the first five chapters seemed more enjoyable then the last three. Haruhi seems suffocated by Kyoya and grew tired of him although kyoya wants to show affection to her it seems to forced in my opinion in how you wrote chapter 8.(honest opinions) overall good story
love crimson red ray88 chapter 8 . 7/23
Omg please update who say them lol what if it was honey lol I think lol wht. If it was tamale that would be heart braking but then again kyoya dose have feelings for him so Wht if they all get to date her omg update
1sunfun chapter 8 . 1/24
Guest chapter 8 . 1/10
More! Plz!
jjfanfan chapter 8 . 12/25/2014
hello from Christmas 2014 (’ω’) pls update cuz i like this fanfic a lot, one of the best ones i've read from this series (*ΦωΦ*) pls keep up the good work (o)/
Classified chapter 8 . 11/15/2014
Who saw!
Amythyst-hime chapter 8 . 8/4/2014
I just speed intensely through six chapters to find myself at the "to be continued ..." My heart was and still is pounding. I imagine something like writer's block came up as soon as the two of them 'boink'd'. Trying to unravel the drama between those two being together is complex enough, but adding the whole host of other characters (pun not intended) to the mix is dizzying. I don't know if you'll ever finish this, and of course I would very much like to see how it plays out, but if I will say that I enjoyed the ride getting here none the less. :)
Amythyst-hime chapter 2 . 8/2/2014

Toes curled. Nether regions 'tingly'.

In the words of George Takei, "Oooh, myyyy."
Amythyst-hime chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
Geehehehe ... Well this makes me all sorts of happy. :3 I know it's not complete yet, and maybe it won't ever be ... but I'm gonna enjoy the ride! That lap scene ... such incredibly pleasant, warm imagery. I can't wait to see how the rest of this goes!
Guest chapter 8 . 6/11/2014
I really like this story - hope to see an update!
Bentears chapter 8 . 4/10/2014
Im guessing there is more to come in this story? I cant wait to read it
kittybelleu chapter 8 . 3/30/2014
amazing is all i can say!
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