Reviews for Locked Up
hollyberry27 chapter 1 . 12/16/2016
Oh god how do I delete a review? I had the app open in my pocket and butt typed a review I am enjoying the story though. my my my my . my my MN MN mm my MN my MN ml
hollyberry27 chapter 4 . 12/16/2016
hollyberry27 chapter 4 . 12/16/2016
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Tchundjong chapter 5 . 11/25/2016
I always thought they would have been such a cutie and awkward couple even through they don't seem like awkward people in general. So cute I'm going to throw up rainbows. I love the little monologues they have with themselves.
Tchundjong chapter 4 . 11/25/2016
I. Don't. Know. But. It's. Just. So. Cute. I seriously don't know why I am typing like this.
Intensify chapter 8 . 7/8/2016
I'm in love with this story
KD Skywalker chapter 8 . 7/4/2016
I really hope you update soon!
93Sasusaku chapter 8 . 11/16/2015
i really hope you could write more to this story, its fascinating and it would be even greater if there were more to the story, like who was the one that haurhi saw leaving while she and kyoya were talking towards the end, tamaki's reaction to it all and the twins reactions. what will happen after she sees kyoya again? please continue, i love how you wrote this story.
dbzwannabe4219 chapter 2 . 8/14/2015
Kyoya stop being creepy it is confusing me.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/25/2015
this chapter is confusing. i mean like from the beginning seemed off like did haruhi just sleep with him (second time ) because she had nothing better to do? Kyoya in this chapter seemed to be too nice and forced. haruhi doesnt seem to think kyoya as nothing more than friends with benefits and a burden. if she doesnt feel the same just write it and not make readers overthink this situation. and lastly, is kyoya gay or something having to choose between haruhi or tamaki? 4/10 in my opinion cant just put smut in it needs more a dynamic twist and a better plot
Guest chapter 8 . 7/25/2015
update soon if you can! Just have to say that the first five chapters seemed more enjoyable then the last three. Haruhi seems suffocated by Kyoya and grew tired of him although kyoya wants to show affection to her it seems to forced in my opinion in how you wrote chapter 8.(honest opinions) overall good story
love crimson red ray88 chapter 8 . 7/23/2015
Omg please update who say them lol what if it was honey lol I think lol wht. If it was tamale that would be heart braking but then again kyoya dose have feelings for him so Wht if they all get to date her omg update
1sunfun chapter 8 . 1/24/2015
Guest chapter 8 . 1/10/2015
More! Plz!
jjfanfan chapter 8 . 12/25/2014
hello from Christmas 2014 (’ω’) pls update cuz i like this fanfic a lot, one of the best ones i've read from this series (*ΦωΦ*) pls keep up the good work (o)/
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