|Reviews for Kill Shot|
| Rehabilitated Sith chapter 2 . 8/24/2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Loved it.
| HAMUCHA chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Wow, this intense.
I'm glad that Neal finally lashed out to Peter and cursed him.
| ClaMiAl chapter 2 . 2/17/2013
The story was cool, very intriguing. It was also pretty confusing, though, since the POVs changed a lot and without any warning. Still, I enjoyed reading it.
| YaoiIsMyDrug.23 chapter 2 . 1/5/2013
| JackiLeigh chapter 2 . 10/3/2012
Thanks for this story. It helps ease my WCWS (White Collar Withdrawal Syndrome) just a little. I also would not object if you decided to add another chapter. Maybe just a follow-up thing.
| Evesgreenleaf chapter 2 . 10/24/2011
Wow! I like your continuation. Hope to read future stories from you.
| pechika chapter 2 . 10/24/2011
Enjoyed reading about a vulnerable Peter, glad Neal and Peter were on the mend.
| extremebandgeek chapter 2 . 10/24/2011
I'm so glad you updated! This was really good. Not only did we get to see how Neal is coping with everything, but getting to see how Peter reacted to everything was great too.
| thevigilante15 chapter 2 . 10/24/2011
| canadianscanget chapter 2 . 10/24/2011
Yeah, I was so hoping the first post was a setup issue as opposed to some off beat styling. Liked the last dream part, with reference tucked in there to the "rules". Nice tie in. You still have room to play more with this story. I don't think anyone would complain if you added another chapter. Pay good heed to Ultrascape. Cheers CCG
| Post U Later chapter 2 . 10/24/2011
Lol That Was Cute At The End. Great Chapter Will There Be More?
| Evesgreenleaf chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Wow! More to the story
| ras0629 chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
| aliceann chapter 2 . 10/21/2011
Thanks for the feedback. I'm afraid I posted without reviewing and the formats didn't show up in the translation. I'm going in to hopefully correct that. I did mean to have the story change back between the POV of Neal and Peter and to sort of portray the internal chaos each man was experiencing, but not quite like this. Thanks.
| WynonaRose chapter 2 . 10/21/2011
Hey there. Thanks for the update. I'm a little ashamed to admit this chapter had me confused. There were so many lines and paragraphs that said only "he" that I had a hard time following who was who in each section. I think I got most of it figured out though.
I'm glad you decided to make it a little longer. Hope Neal and Peter can heal.