Reviews for Glimmer Darkly
VryUnique chapter 22 . 2/5
I wish Bella had more closure with her family and the wolves.
VryUnique chapter 21 . 2/5
I wish Charlie can know.
VryUnique chapter 20 . 2/4
I'm so glad that Bella spoke her mind about Forks, I was cheering her on.
I was annoyed that she was asking permission, like they had a say.
She needs to tell the wolves how Carlisle is a doctor and never killed a
human. How their family is bordering on being outcasts by other vampires.
If they weren't different than that wouldn't be the case.
VryUnique chapter 16 . 2/4
Maybe Jake should have said a little more before he transformed, if Bella
was a little more prepared she might have controlled her fight or flight instinct.
Since Edward is so controlled he should have came back as himself earlier.
Called Bella and told her he had been sick and set his return in motion, hiding
that he was alive just doesn't make sense.
The wolves don't really have any say, it's not like they are going to hunt them
down around the globe.
VryUnique chapter 15 . 2/4
I think Edward's idea had merit, back from the dead, it's possible. Though
I'm sure there will be questions.
Bella should have informed Jake that Edward is a vegetarian, that way the
wolves would also know. She should have explained that so it would have
brought down their threat level. Jacob gave in to easy believing his friend
was hanging around a human eating vampire.
VryUnique chapter 14 . 2/4
Bella should have opened the window and told the bitch to back off, that
would have been awesome. That was so disrespectful, Edward has a mate
and I'm sure she knows it. His mate may be human but it's still his mate.
I like that Bella is taking the change seriously, more serious than in the books.
Or at least she is expressing her doubts which makes her come across as
more serious.
Jake needs to mind his own business, I understand the shock but not the anger,
it is what it is.
VryUnique chapter 13 . 2/4
Bella should have told Angela that if she started seeing Antony romantically than
she would be sure to introduce her, she already said they were just friends.
I'm glad Jacob found his imprint. I hope he realizes how selfish he has been concerning
Bella and feels regret.
I think Charlie could handle the truth and that he would understand. He seems to know
how strongly Bella feels about Edward.
Is Tanya in this story? I've been waiting for the succubus that has the hots for
Edward to be mentioned.
VryUnique chapter 12 . 2/4
Nice first time. Can she get pregnant?
VryUnique chapter 11 . 2/4
VryUnique chapter 5 . 2/2
I figured it was Jake who came crashing through her window.
Was Edward in her room? Is it him who is watching her? If it
is I would think it would make her feel safe and not scared.
I figured it was Jake watching her, giving her the eerie feeling.
How did Bella end up outside and then back in bed?
Seems like a strange thing for Edward to do unless he was saving
her from another vampire.
VryUnique chapter 4 . 2/2
Malaria... that makes sense. Carlisle saved Edward?
So... Edward has triggered the wolves change because he came
back for Bella. It sounded like he was in Bella's room already.
Maybe what Bella saw at her window was a fight between Edward
and a wolf. If Edward is in the area the wolves have to know about it
which makes Leah's words strange. If she thought Edward was a vampire
than she should be pushing Bella to move on, it saying she thinks he is
So Jake is an ass and imprinting on Bella is just wishful thinking.
VryUnique chapter 3 . 2/2
So it wasn't a vampire who tried to get in Bella's window. A wolf? Was it Jacob trying to
get to his imprint? I hope Jacob is wrong about the imprint.
I see Edward's parents bodies were found and his wasn't. I'm hoping his parents were
Edward Sr. and Elizabeth and not Carlisle and Esme.
VryUnique chapter 2 . 2/2
I'm going to guess that Edward and his parents disappeared and were probably
changed, maybe in Brazil. Edward tried to come back to Bella but her blood called
to him and he broke her window before being dragged way.
Jake is a wolf who possibly imprinted on Bella. Did he imprint, or is he twisting
the imprint for his own personal agenda? Your suppose to be whatever your imprint
needs but Jake seems to only be concerned with what he needs.
VryUnique chapter 1 . 2/2
Huh... so many questions. Taking everybody she loved? Did they leave or die?
Not everyone, Charlie and Sue are alive.
26 chapter 24 . 9/7/2023
aw man this was so sweet, so endearing. that was a bit rough having bella go to volterra. i couldn’t help but ask “what else did she think was gonna happen?” but considering the trauma of losing edward once and holding onto a thin thread of hope that he was still alive for MONTHS? i suppose i’m not meant to understand, just try my best to empathize.

i enjoyed reading it, they really felt like real people. edward and bella are best friends that just married each other and that’s the best kind of relationship!
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