Reviews for Lurking in the Dark
doremi13 chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
This was eerie, but awesome!
Amorphous Entity chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Loved it! Fallen-chan out! ..
XzDaFelixZ chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Whoa this is ttly interesting i luv it so much!
Resha04 chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
This is great!

It shows us that even a cheerful and innocent person like Feliciano can have a dark side. And how Italy treats him really sends chill down my spine.

The way you describe the atmosphere is really good that I can picture it very well in my mind.

I also love how you make them in characters, but with the sides that was never exposed, the sides that is so human.

Feliciano is sweet and happy as he is, but he's also bitter and hateful toward Italy.

Romano is still loud-mouth and rude as ever, but he also shows his love for his brother with his own way.

It's just like human, to have both dark sides and light sides. :)

And the scene with young Italies is really unexpected. I really didn't see it coming, where Feliciano became so angry and attacked Romano.

I didn't even know if that scene truly happened, or it's just Italy tried to mess Feliciano's mind. It is really well-written.

And the sentence "You want to make sure he stays dead this time" really strikes a final blow.

And in the end, when they (and I) thought that they finally got peace, the shadow of Italy just kinda ruined it all (I was like "omygod omygod!" *horror face*). But I really like it. At least Feliciano is safe as long as they're together.

Will there be a sequel or continuation of this? :)
XxX-Curly-Wurly-XxX chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
You wrote this story wonderfully! Really, this deserves way more reviews, you're a brilliant writer! :) n_n
silvers-edge chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
This was awesome, a little confusing but I think I straightened everything out on my head. I liked how nice Romano is at the end, tis sweet. Is that spot for Germany still open? I'm interested in participating
Melody Syper Carston chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
This is really cool! I like how dark it was and then how sweet Romano seemed to Italy afterwards.

Awesome job