|Reviews for Hearts of the Nobodies|
| MelissaUmbrella chapter 2 . 1/20/2013
"Complemented my hair like peanut butter complements toast". -that is the best line I have ever read
| Adelilah chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Wow... this was amazing... trollfics like these are rare y'know :D!
| Sugoi Baka chapter 12 . 5/30/2012
Please update Doctor Hoo! c:
| Captain Rodriguez chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
This story has a perfect example of a Mary Sue. The Author's Notes are random and don't apply to the story. The grammar is horrible. You act like a stereotypical ten year old girl. Obvious troll is obvious.
| JSD chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Troll, or an eight year old . . . but I'm hoping for troll. I didn't read anything but the first paragraph. It's actually sad. It's not even a fun troll read it's just really, really awful. Stop trying to be My Immortal, you're not even in the same league!
| Hi chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
I think you should listen to this song: watch?vOFKUnfwBPTU
I think it would show what I feel right now. :)
| Why chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
This was just...just awful. It made me sick and killed half my brain. Here are some things I would like to know or point out to you: The Doctor would never ever steal. Seifer and his gang are bullies to everyone so why in the name of Twilight Town would you side with them? In the second paragraph you said Frak Iero instead of Frank Iero. You wouldn't be part Doctor, you'd be part Time Lord or, since you're a girl, part Time Lady. How would you be part Time Lord if Gallifrey was destroyed and the Doctor was the only Time Lord left? Are you Amy and Rory's daughter instead of River? Can you SHOW how evil your stepmother is instead of telling us? What kind of "local convenience store" has security guards? What the heck is a "Tobuscus"? Why don't you live with someone other than your Stepmother? If she's so evil why don't you run away? Why are you in Seifer's gang instead of Roxas's? You would have a better chance of running into Axel if you were in Roxas's gang. And last but not least WHY WOULD YOU EVEN CONSIDER CONTINUING THIS THING?
| The Executor Zero chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
How does one recognise a retarded troll u ask?
When the retarded turd posts its new author name on the old account. anyway thanks again for letting me find you so i can flame you to my heart's desire. Cheers!
ps: Retarded b...
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/17/2012
| MRS.axle1997 chapter 2 . 3/13/2012
TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL TROLL.
TL;DR: I'm a troll.
| Mother of God chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Stop writing. You completely suck at it and don't try to deny it because it's true. You make whovians look like complete idiots. Just... go back to facebook and stop ruining the FF community.
| PointZero chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
This is garbage. It's obvious you're doing this on purpose, so just stop.
| Sube the Wench chapter 9 . 3/5/2012
1) Whitney Houston didn't sing the song from Titanic. It was sung by Celine Dion.
2) When you learn how to use it, spellcheck and proper grammar will be your best friends.
3) The plot is entirely incomprehensible.
And on a final, non-fanfic related note:
Do you have any idea how much of a snob you sound like in the author's notes? Saying that Toronto is full of communists, and complaining that you have to go to a "dirty English school"...it's no wonder that your parents want you to learn how to be more tolerant of other people.
| Koneko713 chapter 9 . 3/2/2012
Oh...dear...lord...I am 95% sure this is a trollfic, but that 5% doubt makes me want to cry. This story probably hits every single item on the imaginary "never do this when writing fan fiction list," which is why I'm pretty sure it's a troll-you couldn't be this...well, bad, if you weren't trying, right?
If you were tired of haters on your stories, then don't change accounts, improve your writing. Learn to spell. Stop randomly raping capslock. Stop talking about your characters' boobs. Really. Most of us are here to read good fiction, not this...drabble. Also, no one cares about your quebec issues, okay? Quit ranting on it, and you can move to France when you grow up (I'm assuming 1997 would be the year that you were born) since apparently French people are so superior.
| WOW chapter 7 . 1/31/2012
Oh great, you're BACK. I thought that you were done when you stopped updating your sparkle or whatever account, but lo and behold, you just got a new one. I can't believe you even compared your story to Fullmetal Alchemist. Please, don't gratify yourself. You're story is full of spelling mistakes and Lizzie is unbearable. I hope "Gamzey/Gamzie" sobers up again and kills her.