|Reviews for Timeless Story|
| gusenitsa chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
Cute story, you use a lot of passive language here which can feel a little distant, perhaps experiment with some different POVs? Or Zoom in a little bit on a particular defining events as well as the general arc of the story.
Thanks for sharing , I know this is an old story, you probably don't need this kind of advice anymore!
| ThiefOfBlood413 chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
So sweet :)
| Kypriotha chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
What a lovely look at their intertwined life story :)
| Amelia chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
I love your story!
| zenbon zakura chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
awwwwww sooo cute! i love that pairing!