Reviews for Unpaved Roads
Sam and Dean crazy ass wench chapter 11 . 1/2/2012
Omg Hun you wrote the hell scene perfectly Again sweetie so intense I'm glad that Adam said let go get Sam wow I wasn't expecting Crowley to help them get out of hell laney reacation to when Adam came back was so heart warming so many things I could say about this chapter /story I've so enjoyed reading this so much hun on to the next chapter I go :)xooxoxo
Kinthinia chapter 12 . 1/2/2012
I think that was a happily ever after in its own way :)

I really really really loved Adam's reaction XD would be awkward if anyone else heard that though and didn't understand the relationships going on.

I especially like how Laney made her confession and even more so for how she didn't reply to Dean right away even though it did keep Dean in suspense.

I like how Dean came to understand what John was doing for Adam and how he found himself agreeing with it too. I hadn't exactly thought of that.

I enjoyed their trip through Hell -so much better than an endless line up ;) I think there are many different versions of Hell in its own way and I agree more on the Dante way of viewing it as however many levels.

I throoughly enjoyed Crowley's taunt of Cas about fly swatters.

This was a wonderful conclusion to a wonderful love story. :3
SPN Mum chapter 12 . 1/2/2012
Nope, no 'happily ever after' for the Winchesters, but I'll settle for 'happily for a little while'. lol Adam would fit right in with their family. I believe that Sam would eventually get a handle on his memories, and maybe even find a woman of his own someday. Bobby would definately become their home base too.

Great ending to a great story! Even though I am sad it is over now, I really enjoyed it. I hope you have other ideas about the Winchesters, to write about. I'm dying to see Tasha come back. :)
SPN Mum chapter 11 . 1/2/2012
Wow! That was an amazing trip to the cage! I am so glad that Michael decided to help them get out. Dean DID make a lot of sense. Lucifer was just a poor loser, but then I already knew that! lol I don't know how Sam will do though. He was there a long time, and Adam said Lucifer hardly ever left him alone. He's going to have horrible memories for a long time. :(

Great story! I'm sad that it's ending.
Kaoz chapter 12 . 1/2/2012
my brother is making out w my sister...

i about lost my drink reading this bit )u'd think i'd have been warned what with the 'i like porn too' line lol

for a 1st time love story i give u a 10. i love it.

cant wait to see what comes next bc u did leave it sort of open to following s7 now...
Kaoz chapter 11 . 1/2/2012
full of actioln and quick but i like we got everyone safe- or sot of. )
The Lilac Elf of Lothlorien chapter 12 . 1/1/2012
Kick-ass ending to the story!

Dean gets a happy ending, Adam gets to make his own future, and Sammy's back to normal!

Love it!
The Lilac Elf of Lothlorien chapter 11 . 1/1/2012
You know, Michael and Lucifer really are idiots for ever messing with the Winchesters and Company.

Very excellent story and I can't wait to see that epilouge.
Dawnie-7 chapter 10 . 12/31/2011
First I want to say sorry sorry sorry that it took me so long to get to this chapter. Been sick for a while and haven't been much in the mood to get online. Not to mention, if I'm gonna be honest, I was stalling a bit because the thought of coming to the end of this simply devastated me :) So trilled to see there's still one more! Such a wonderful christmas gift, hehe.

I forgot to mention on the last review so let me point out that I love the small changes you've made to the plot to incorporate Laney and her life with the Winchesters. So smartly done and extremely believable. You're evil Sam is beyond spectacular, if not imensely scary as hell! Also scary, you're tellings of hell. Very vivid and seriously chills inducing.

""Ahh," Cas said with a nod of understanding. "Much like you did not think you deserved to be saved from hell, you do not think you deserve to be truly happy.""

LOVE! Quite possibly my favorite line of the whole story, or at the very least top 3. That one line so perfectly captured the whole set up of the story, the relationships and everything in between in a nutshell. I could have fallen out of my chair reading that line :) You Are Awesome!
xJenzaFreakx chapter 10 . 12/21/2011
Oh shit! Sammy! No, NOT Sammy! You wrote him very well, as soulless Sam and it must've been difficult going from writing his real self to his emotionless self.. Very well done! And I loved how mixed up how Dean found out about Sam being alive, your version is, legit, way better than the show's- in my honest opinion- lol. Sorry I've been a little off here but I am going back to work with writing and I can't wait to see how you wrap this story up! I loved every chapter! D
xsparklesthemagicalunicornx chapter 10 . 12/20/2011
Oh no Dean! Why would you attempt to jump into the hell gate? Silly boy. Love evil Sammy but dislike his evil vandetta against Bobby and Laney. Need to get his sweet soul back in asap. Just bought Season 6 on DVD so rewatching the whole thing and getting sad about Cas...again. Loved this chapter and the last one cause I think I was slack and didn't review. I always love your stories so keep up the awesome work. Okay I'm going to stop rambling now. Can't wait for the next update D

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Dawnie-7 chapter 9 . 12/20/2011
Very nice. Loved the play out of the tension (that you could feel through the screen!) between Sam and Laney over what happened during their time together. You capture souless Sam quite well. Although it hurts to read, I guess you gotta give Dean and Laney credit for their will power to ignore their bond. I particularly like Cas' musings over not understanding humans :) Lol, I completely agree.
Sam and Dean crazy ass wench chapter 10 . 12/19/2011
Wow that chapter was so freaking intense girl loved it the talk between dean and Cas was so amazingly well written we all knew that dean was running away from laney because he is in love with her and than his talk with Lisa it was heartbreaking she knew herself that dean was in live with laney and not her but I'm happy she told him to go back to laney and sam omg hun you totally wrote Sam to a t in this chapter he was so cold and heartless in what he done to laney sending her to hell you did such a perfect job again and dean went to save her from hell omg wow this chapter totally blew me away and now dean is going to stay and get Sam and Adam soul so please please update soon I still Cant believe their is only one chapter left so sad I don't want this to end :( on less you have a sequel in mind because we need more of laney dean Sam and bobby and of course our fav angel Cass thanks so much for updating Hun oxoxoxxo
SPN Mum chapter 10 . 12/17/2011
You're doing a fantastic job with this story! Of course soulless Sam is fun to write! That's why he was in half of season 6! lol

Darn soulless Sam! Changing the ritual, so that Laney was sent to Hell. That was so sneaky of him! Laney should have called Bobby to be sure Sam wasn't lying. She shouldn't have trusted him, as she knew he wasn't right in the head. If only Dean had arrived a little sooner. Now Dean is going to stay in Hell and try to retrieve Sam and Adam. I hope that works out. Maybe Cas should let Crowley know, maybe he could keep the demons from catching him. I can't believe there is only one chapter left! *cries* I hope you have some more ideas for Sam and Dean, Laney is invited too! lol

Thanks for this chapter! :D
Miss E Charlotte chapter 10 . 12/17/2011
Wow, i love this story so much. I don't even know where to begin. I love your writing, how detailed everything is. I can really picture everything i read. Also i love your OC Laney, even though she had a rough life, she is such a strong person and i love her and Dean together. I even liked Amy for the short time she was in the story and almost cried when she died.

Once again, great story, i laughed, smiled and cried. Now i can't wait for the next chapter, hope you update soon!
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