Reviews for Unpaved Roads
Kaoz chapter 12 . 1/2/2012
my brother is making out w my sister...

i about lost my drink reading this bit )u'd think i'd have been warned what with the 'i like porn too' line lol

for a 1st time love story i give u a 10. i love it.

cant wait to see what comes next bc u did leave it sort of open to following s7 now...
Kaoz chapter 11 . 1/2/2012
full of actioln and quick but i like we got everyone safe- or sot of. )
The Lilac Elf of Lothlorien chapter 12 . 1/1/2012
Kick-ass ending to the story!

Dean gets a happy ending, Adam gets to make his own future, and Sammy's back to normal!

Love it!
The Lilac Elf of Lothlorien chapter 11 . 1/1/2012
You know, Michael and Lucifer really are idiots for ever messing with the Winchesters and Company.

Very excellent story and I can't wait to see that epilouge.
Dawnie-7 chapter 10 . 12/31/2011
First I want to say sorry sorry sorry that it took me so long to get to this chapter. Been sick for a while and haven't been much in the mood to get online. Not to mention, if I'm gonna be honest, I was stalling a bit because the thought of coming to the end of this simply devastated me :) So trilled to see there's still one more! Such a wonderful christmas gift, hehe.

I forgot to mention on the last review so let me point out that I love the small changes you've made to the plot to incorporate Laney and her life with the Winchesters. So smartly done and extremely believable. You're evil Sam is beyond spectacular, if not imensely scary as hell! Also scary, you're tellings of hell. Very vivid and seriously chills inducing.

""Ahh," Cas said with a nod of understanding. "Much like you did not think you deserved to be saved from hell, you do not think you deserve to be truly happy.""

LOVE! Quite possibly my favorite line of the whole story, or at the very least top 3. That one line so perfectly captured the whole set up of the story, the relationships and everything in between in a nutshell. I could have fallen out of my chair reading that line :) You Are Awesome!
xJenzaFreakx chapter 10 . 12/21/2011
Oh shit! Sammy! No, NOT Sammy! You wrote him very well, as soulless Sam and it must've been difficult going from writing his real self to his emotionless self.. Very well done! And I loved how mixed up how Dean found out about Sam being alive, your version is, legit, way better than the show's- in my honest opinion- lol. Sorry I've been a little off here but I am going back to work with writing and I can't wait to see how you wrap this story up! I loved every chapter! D
xsparklesthemagicalunicornx chapter 10 . 12/20/2011
Oh no Dean! Why would you attempt to jump into the hell gate? Silly boy. Love evil Sammy but dislike his evil vandetta against Bobby and Laney. Need to get his sweet soul back in asap. Just bought Season 6 on DVD so rewatching the whole thing and getting sad about Cas...again. Loved this chapter and the last one cause I think I was slack and didn't review. I always love your stories so keep up the awesome work. Okay I'm going to stop rambling now. Can't wait for the next update D

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Dawnie-7 chapter 9 . 12/20/2011
Very nice. Loved the play out of the tension (that you could feel through the screen!) between Sam and Laney over what happened during their time together. You capture souless Sam quite well. Although it hurts to read, I guess you gotta give Dean and Laney credit for their will power to ignore their bond. I particularly like Cas' musings over not understanding humans :) Lol, I completely agree.
Klaus little hybrid minx chapter 10 . 12/19/2011
Wow that chapter was so freaking intense girl loved it the talk between dean and Cas was so amazingly well written we all knew that dean was running away from laney because he is in love with her and than his talk with Lisa it was heartbreaking she knew herself that dean was in live with laney and not her but I'm happy she told him to go back to laney and sam omg hun you totally wrote Sam to a t in this chapter he was so cold and heartless in what he done to laney sending her to hell you did such a perfect job again and dean went to save her from hell omg wow this chapter totally blew me away and now dean is going to stay and get Sam and Adam soul so please please update soon I still Cant believe their is only one chapter left so sad I don't want this to end :( on less you have a sequel in mind because we need more of laney dean Sam and bobby and of course our fav angel Cass thanks so much for updating Hun oxoxoxxo
SPN Mum chapter 10 . 12/17/2011
You're doing a fantastic job with this story! Of course soulless Sam is fun to write! That's why he was in half of season 6! lol

Darn soulless Sam! Changing the ritual, so that Laney was sent to Hell. That was so sneaky of him! Laney should have called Bobby to be sure Sam wasn't lying. She shouldn't have trusted him, as she knew he wasn't right in the head. If only Dean had arrived a little sooner. Now Dean is going to stay in Hell and try to retrieve Sam and Adam. I hope that works out. Maybe Cas should let Crowley know, maybe he could keep the demons from catching him. I can't believe there is only one chapter left! *cries* I hope you have some more ideas for Sam and Dean, Laney is invited too! lol

Thanks for this chapter! :D
Miss E Charlotte chapter 10 . 12/17/2011
Wow, i love this story so much. I don't even know where to begin. I love your writing, how detailed everything is. I can really picture everything i read. Also i love your OC Laney, even though she had a rough life, she is such a strong person and i love her and Dean together. I even liked Amy for the short time she was in the story and almost cried when she died.

Once again, great story, i laughed, smiled and cried. Now i can't wait for the next chapter, hope you update soon!
kissacazador chapter 10 . 12/17/2011
Of course, you didn't disappoint us! I just hope Dean knows what he is doing, because this is a lot to take on, but I can't blame him either.

The worst part of this chapter is what Sam did to Laney and almost do to Bobby :(

Even though I liked your Lisa, I was glad to see this character gone.

My fingers are crossed for Dean to get eveyone back to normal and he lives happily ever after with Laney, but since these are the Winchesters, its unlikely.
JinxedCobra chapter 10 . 12/17/2011
Honestly, the whole Lisa storyline pissed me off...not that I don't like her character. But Dean would never fit in her world and she would never put Ben in danger. It was a useless storyline and in the end, it only hurt Dean.

Anyway, awesome chapter and thank you for reminding me of how much I hated Robo-Sam. 'shudders' That was so wrong.

Looking forward to the next one, keep up the good work.
The Lilac Elf of Lothlorien chapter 10 . 12/17/2011
Um... Why do I have the sudden urge to say "I've got a bad feeling about this?"

Do I doubt that Dean can pull it off? No.

Do I think that Lucifer and Michael are going to put Dean through the worst Hell imaginable? (Pun intended) Uhh... DUH!

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
JinxedCobra chapter 9 . 12/13/2011
This is the best fanfiction I've read for this fandom in a long time, though I'm not too fond of the events in season six and seven. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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