Reviews for Unpaved Roads
kissacazador chapter 9 . 12/12/2011
Wow, this chapter was amazing and I maybe in the minority, but I loved that Sam killed Laney's father! For as much as I hated Soul-less Sam on the show, I really enjoyed him in this chapter.

Even with all this crap going on all Dean thought of was if she & Sam hooked-up...same ol' Dean, lol ;D

I liked her plan and wished it would've worked to save Adam, but now they got a soul to save also.

I tried reading this chapter before I went to bed, but now I know why and glad it wasn't my new computer. At times, I feel FF hates me, so now I was able to read this chapter. I must get a lottery ticket, because I feel lucky, especially now that this chapter is back on. Gotta luv FF...at times, lmao XOXO
SPN Mum chapter 9 . 12/12/2011
I've really missed reading this story! I'm so glad you're back. :) I LOVED this chapter!

I can't believe Dean is happy going back to Lisa! It must be because his soul is still missing Sam's soul, even though he isn't consciously aware of it. Dean will probably feel differently, once Sam has his soul back. Cas needs to kick Crowley's butt too, for leaving Sam's soul in the Cage with Lucifer. Cas should have realized that Crowley would pull something, after all, that's what demons do. *rolls eyes* Now they just need to find a way to fix Sam, and maybe help get Adam out too. I wonder what would happen if Lucifer was stuck in the Cage, but Michael got out? Would he be any better than Raphael? .O
The Lilac Elf of Lothlorien chapter 9 . 12/12/2011
So are you going with the canon Death soul retrieval or something else?

I have to say you do a really good job of writing Soulless Sam. Very crepy. I wouldn't trust him.

And Dean's going back to Lisa and Ben but are they still going to want him?

I have so many questions!
Sam and Dean crazy ass wench chapter 9 . 12/12/2011
Omfg omfg that chapter was freaking kickass wow I'm still speechless loved it that why I always looks forward to your fight scenes you detail them perfectly and the way you write soulless Sam was spot on Hun yeah for the hounds being dead. I taught she was going to get bitten again and than Sam kills it wow it seems that dean noticed the tension between Sam and laney at least laney faced up to her dad before Sam killed him and than he ask laney iow about a thank you lay even though dean was saying all those sweet things to laney to get her to stop I think he really did mean all of them and now when dean finds out about Sam soul I hope he dosent have a go at her for not telling him sooner dean left and went back to Lisa omg Hun update update like now pretty please I'm seriously dying waiting for the next chapter already you seriously rock Hun :) ps fanfiction has been a bitch lately but I'm happy it back to normal now so I could read this chapter ttys oxoxoxo
Kaoz chapter 9 . 12/12/2011
Friggin' Awesome! )

what really sticks out is sam's 'thank u lay' n the 'can we at least eat bfo we bury him?'

dude that was hilarious in a creepy sort of way.

I'm wondering where you're taking the story with the 'soulmate-mark' cus there's only one chapter left... not enough time for the happy ending, lol -pun intended-

Either way, sad to see this coming to an end and really enjoying the story.
Sam and Dean crazy ass wench chapter 9 . 12/12/2011
Omfg omfg that chapter was freaking kickass wow I'm still speechless loved it that why I always looks forward to your fight scenes you detail them perfectly and the way you write soulless Sam was spot on Hun yeah for the hounds being dead. I taught she was going to get bitten again and than Sam kills it wow it seems that dean noticed the tension between Sam and laney at least laney faced up to her dad before Sam killed him and than he ask laney iow about a thank you lay even though dean was saying all those sweet things to laney to get her to stop I think he really did mean all of them and now when dean finds out about Sam soul I hope he dosent have a go at her for not telling him sooner dean left and went back to Lisa omg Hun update update like now pretty please I'm seriously dying waiting for the next chapter already you seriously rock Hun :) ps fanfiction has been a bitch lately but I'm happy it back to normal now so I could read this chapter ttys oxoxoxo
Kazs91 chapter 8 . 12/12/2011
Hey I love this story sooo much. And I haven't on alert and it says chapter 9 is up however it's not showing up. Which I hate FF for totally because we all know that's it FFs fault that it isn't showing up!

Anyways hope the problems solved soon! I cant wait to read the next chapter. And see how deans gonna react and everything!
deansgirl1 chapter 8 . 12/11/2011
hey amazing story can't wait for more update soon D
xJenzaFreakx chapter 8 . 12/11/2011
Sorry I've been MIA for so long! My RL is just...I can't even get into it, I'll be here all night filling up your review page with my pitiful b.s! Anyway, this chapter was cringe-worthy! Ugh, poor Laney! Having to be soaked in ice water and being so out of it and delusional- sort of, lol. I really hope these two, if they don't end up together, at least keep tabs on each other after all they've been through! I got an alert saying you updated chapter 9 but nothing's coming up! Still only 8 chapters! FF is so slow and lanky sometimes, haha. I also want to apologize for my lack of updating, like I said...RL. My energy and inspiration is literally being sucked out of me. I'll update ASAP, though. Can't wait for the next chapter to finally upload! D Hope your RL isn't as hectic as mine has been!
kissacazador chapter 8 . 11/29/2011
Oh man, what a cliffhanger! I LOVE it! No wonder why Bobby wanted Dean to leave, because he was afraid of them running into one another.

And what has Laney really got herself into? Liked how Dean was looking at her body... he's the same old Dean ;D

Dean's gonna to feel guilty about Lisa & Ben, especially when she was so damn understanding.

Now the four of them will hafta work together to get Adam out.
Sam and Dean crazy ass wench chapter 8 . 11/27/2011
Wow awesome chapter sweetie loved it again as always wow bobby is so procteive of laney you could just feel it when he turned and looked at dean when laney said she was still in love with dean and of course the way he was looking out for her in the bathroom but that just bobby for you he is even like that with the boys poor dean does love laney but he in turmoil over Lisa and Ben he doesn't know which way to choose I vote he goes with laney though lol wow wth is with those tattoos all over laney seems like some heavy mojo that she is involved in I hope they can save her evil cliffy missy I could just imagine dean face when Sam walked into bobbys house looks like Sam bobby and laney have some explaining to do no wonder bobby was trying to get dean to leave I wonder how dean chat with laney will go wow Hun you are such an exceptional writer you always keep me entertained with you're stories it keeps me wanting more so please please update ASAP i need more:) whoo spn is back next fri but I won't be able to watch it as I'm going away on thursday to go and see my mom in England and do loads of Xmas shopping I hope to talk to you soon miss ya oxoxo
Dawnie-7 chapter 8 . 11/27/2011
Just to quickly confirm your assesment in that review reply, yes, I am very much a romantic :) Loved the little moment in the tub. Not only Bobby's fatherly tenderness with her, but her oblivious admittance of still being in love with Dean, and then, in my eyes anyways, the protective father glare Bobby sent Dean's way, lol. Very nice. But poor Dean, being pulled in all these different directions of mixed feelings and emotions and trying to balance what he wants and what he thinks he needs...wouldn't wish that on my worst enemy. Of course, also in love with the fact that even with everything going on, Dean still makes room for a dirty thought :) Love him! And waaaaay perfect timing Sam...oh won't this be fun :) As far as what I'd like to see... well now, I don't really think I have to say it out loud ;)
Kaoz chapter 7 . 11/26/2011
i dont want this to end (
WhatsGoingOn chapter 8 . 11/26/2011
STAR CROSSED LOVERS!
Kaoz chapter 8 . 11/26/2011
Oh uh...hi Dean

Ha! I'd have loved to c the reaction.

I like the hounds.
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