|Reviews for When the Moon Sets|
| a shadow of the heart chapter 1 . 3/28
I love what you've done so far and can't wait until you upload again...
| Winged-Ashes chapter 3 . 9/22/2014
This is good plz updat it soon
| Jezzika of Medius chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
Wow... I think I like this better. You remembered to add Kushina's verbal tick.
| Tsukiyo69 chapter 3 . 7/10/2013
A really good story.
With the Uzumaki clan, Kushina and Minato, Naruto's amnesy and finally Madara back from the future...
Hum... I can't wait to read the next. Please update soon !
| Tsukiyo69 chapter 2 . 7/10/2013
Yeh ! A fiction with some ninjas from Uzushiogakure !
They seem nice.
So Akio is Naruto's grandfather ? There will be some funny situations in the future. XD
| Tsukiyo69 chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Very good first chapter.
Minato and Kushina are so cute like this !
I go right now read the next chapters.
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/26/2013
I beg of you to continue this, wise one. I love it. :)
| Stitched In Ice chapter 3 . 5/1/2013
I'm just gonna be frank with you and say that the previous version was a lot better in my opinion. Like A LOT. From the first chapter, and even the way you change the almost proposal, I think you downgraded it. I don't mean to offend, so I hope you take this as constructive criticism. I don't know what the plot was before or what exactly it is now, but from what I've seen so far, it was better the other way.
Maybe that's only me though.
| Mcnitra chapter 3 . 1/3/2013
oh my god. your writing is awesome.
and i havent read such a storyline, its brilliant.
i hope you update soon
why didnt Akio see the resemblance between Minato and the unknown boy?
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/22/2012
That was so interesting .Is there a new chapter coming out? I really wanted to read more..
| twilightromance4ever chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
it would be AWESOME if you decided to continue this...:)
| nequam-tenshi chapter 3 . 6/10/2012
UPDATE! This is a good story, and the details are nice.
| Red Echantress chapter 3 . 5/16/2012
I hate to say this, but honestly I like the first one better...
| Julie star me chapter 3 . 4/11/2012
I love this Story but I must admit I enjoyed the first one just a tiny bit better. I loved in the scene in the first story where the little boy followed the 'glow' in the cieling. Other than that I love your story and hoping for more soon
| Rasengan 918 chapter 3 . 3/28/2012
This is an awesome story! Please update soon!