Reviews for When the Moon Sets
a shadow of the heart chapter 1 . 3/28
I love what you've done so far and can't wait until you upload again...
Winged-Ashes chapter 3 . 9/22/2014
This is good plz updat it soon
Jezzika of Medius chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
Wow... I think I like this better. You remembered to add Kushina's verbal tick.
Tsukiyo69 chapter 3 . 7/10/2013
A really good story.
With the Uzumaki clan, Kushina and Minato, Naruto's amnesy and finally Madara back from the future...
Hum... I can't wait to read the next. Please update soon !
Tsukiyo69 chapter 2 . 7/10/2013
Yeh ! A fiction with some ninjas from Uzushiogakure !
They seem nice.
So Akio is Naruto's grandfather ? There will be some funny situations in the future. XD
Tsukiyo69 chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Very good first chapter.
Minato and Kushina are so cute like this !
I go right now read the next chapters.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/26/2013
I beg of you to continue this, wise one. I love it. :)
Stitched In Ice chapter 3 . 5/1/2013
I'm just gonna be frank with you and say that the previous version was a lot better in my opinion. Like A LOT. From the first chapter, and even the way you change the almost proposal, I think you downgraded it. I don't mean to offend, so I hope you take this as constructive criticism. I don't know what the plot was before or what exactly it is now, but from what I've seen so far, it was better the other way.

Maybe that's only me though.
Mcnitra chapter 3 . 1/3/2013
oh my god. your writing is awesome.
and i havent read such a storyline, its brilliant.
i hope you update soon

why didnt Akio see the resemblance between Minato and the unknown boy?
Guest chapter 3 . 8/22/2012
That was so interesting .Is there a new chapter coming out? I really wanted to read more..
twilightromance4ever chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
it would be AWESOME if you decided to continue this...:)
nequam-tenshi chapter 3 . 6/10/2012
UPDATE! This is a good story, and the details are nice.
Red Echantress chapter 3 . 5/16/2012
I hate to say this, but honestly I like the first one better...
Julie star me chapter 3 . 4/11/2012
I love this Story but I must admit I enjoyed the first one just a tiny bit better. I loved in the scene in the first story where the little boy followed the 'glow' in the cieling. Other than that I love your story and hoping for more soon
Rasengan 918 chapter 3 . 3/28/2012
This is an awesome story! Please update soon!
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