Reviews for my cinderella story
GinervaMarieChaseEverdeen chapter 4 . 1/22
If you still want to write this, you'll have at least one reader.
ellie.atkins11 chapter 1 . 1/21
You should check your story. Don't write in bold also check your grammar and spelling
ellie.atkins11 chapter 3 . 8/1/2016
Write more
LittleLoretta5 chapter 3 . 7/10/2013
please post soon! this is SO cute!
Guest chapter 2 . 7/31/2012
It's been 7 months since your last update if I were you I'd post a chapter at least once a week.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/10/2012
Grt story!buh where r the rest of the chapters?we want thm!
Bannanerz chapter 2 . 5/13/2012
I think they should kiss in the rain :)
mouang chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
I like it. You've got a good plot going, but you may want to look over the gramatic errors, like you've used to instead of two. Also it would be better if you put more details in it...such as their emotions and expressions. I wish you luck and never be discouraged! :)

~mouang