Dunno. It starts to become more and more boring. The romance part of this story is honestly garbage. The author is trying to be 'realistic' but he has the same problem as many other 'realistic' fics. In his pursuit to make it realistic, he forgets that realistic is not always better or more entertaining. People do not read stories to see realistic shit. They read them to be entertained.

For example, here the author utterly removed Naruto's Shadow Clones from the equation. Naruto can't do them. It was done so the MC wouldn't quickly progress. The author can say whatever he wants. But it was simply a blatant nerf to the character.

And now we have the relationship BS where Naruto is with Hinata in the 'dreamworld'. They have a relationship. But in the normal world, they actually consider having Naruto be with another girl while Hinata would just roll over and accept her Hyuuga obligations, spreading her legs for whoever they decide. The author wants me to believe that they can plot the political takeover of Konoha but they can't plot how to get Hinata out of that situation? Seriously? It just feels really bad reading about it. It's soooo realistic that it made my interest in this story plummet.

Another thing is that Naruto has the help of literally 2 gods who can use the magic of all things. But for some reason, there was not even ONE FUCKING THING that could truly help him in the future to a massive degree. Every time there is a talk about something like that, the author just finds numerous reasons why it can't be done. At this point, I wonder what good even are these 2 gods. Sure, they gave Naruto a family. Nice. They taught him. Good. But he is still quite weak despite having 2 gods helping him. In fact, their help in his strength development was extremely limited to almost nonexistent. You'd think that having 2 gods actually truly interested in helping you would make some difference but apparently not. Jashin can make his devout believers immortal but clearly, these two gods that help Naruto are so much inferior it is not even funny, huh?

Sorry, I am just frustrated. The author is so fixated on 'realistic' impression and keeping the MC weak in 'realistic' manner that it's just off-putting. Every time there is some way for MC to get stronger? Nah. It can't be done cuz this this and this.

Well, fck this shit.

Mate please come back.
This story is of the best quality.

Extremely boring, dozens of POVs, no payoff to any plot thread, skip

this fic is trash

Thanks for your hard work and effort I hope you decided to pick it back up I love your work have a great one.

Trash

I like how the story is developing

good story so far. I like the explanation in this chapter.

The magic thing is just unnecessary…

Wlriting naruto is about chakra not some shtitty magic and now you giving this univers two mc lol. And pls read the lore or others important stuff befor us split mc.

Hey its hard to believe I still enjoy this story nearly 8 years since I last read it. Thanks for writing it.

Awesome. Please update soon

This chapter... Was something else. It was incredible

One of my favorite fics, shame it's dead. I'd like to see the resolution to the Naruto/Hinata/Yakumo situation at least. Any plans on how that would have worked out?

Councilor Homura! From wallpaper to Badass. So Cool!