Reviews for Help from a Stranger (Up for Adoption)
TheGoodDoctor13 chapter 2 . 6/14
I like how an immortal Naruto who's been training for thousands of years is actually strong. Most other crossovers have him weaker than the main cast for some reason even though it's post 4th Shinobi war Naruto who can box juubi Madara
acowles02 chapter 7 . 2/20
Grammar has steadily been getting worse. Do you not propfread?
acowles02 chapter 2 . 2/19
Naruto should not have been suprised by hidden weapons, hea a shinobi. Only way i could see ot make sense otherwise is that its been such a long time since anyone he foight actually used them, that he did not expect a shinigami to do so.
bibink729 chapter 12 . 12/13/2023
good
bibink729 chapter 2 . 10/2/2023
jnnn
SlyFox9 chapter 1 . 9/28/2023
Not a bad start. I like it.
bibink729 chapter 2 . 9/11/2023
hinn
moppmannodon chapter 1 . 8/12/2022
First sentence has a typo. Just started reading and already a rough impression... but maybe it'll get better..
Guest chapter 12 . 3/12/2022
Girl walks in on guy in bathroom and then hits guys, yeah thats not funny or cutsie, that's fucking abuse and shows psychological instability and the fact that you the writer are trying to make it funny or cutsie shows you are mentally unstable, please seek immediate psychiatric help as you clearly have mental problems
TCentraL chapter 12 . 11/17/2021
This chapter ruined your entire story. no plot any longer, and this is just a copy of bleach no originality. After he let aizen's espada hit him I quit. Need to plan better for your next stories
SHWAT chapter 12 . 9/24/2021
The power levels feel very skewed, don't know if I like this...
fjutableng1 chapter 3 . 8/8/2021
"Which war did you sirvivde?"

"All of them."

Badass moment
Jondoe0321 chapter 2 . 7/20/2021
Blackmailed by a child
Jondoe0321 chapter 2 . 7/20/2021
Your making the sword out to be aqua
rpgfan1 chapter 17 . 7/19/2021
please update this story
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