good

I like how an immortal Naruto who's been training for thousands of years is actually strong. Most other crossovers have him weaker than the main cast for some reason even though it's post 4th Shinobi war Naruto who can box juubi Madara

Grammar has steadily been getting worse. Do you not propfread?

Naruto should not have been suprised by hidden weapons, hea a shinobi. Only way i could see ot make sense otherwise is that its been such a long time since anyone he foight actually used them, that he did not expect a shinigami to do so.

good

jnnn

Not a bad start. I like it.

hinn

First sentence has a typo. Just started reading and already a rough impression... but maybe it'll get better..

Girl walks in on guy in bathroom and then hits guys, yeah thats not funny or cutsie, that's fucking abuse and shows psychological instability and the fact that you the writer are trying to make it funny or cutsie shows you are mentally unstable, please seek immediate psychiatric help as you clearly have mental problems

This chapter ruined your entire story. no plot any longer, and this is just a copy of bleach no originality. After he let aizen's espada hit him I quit. Need to plan better for your next stories

The power levels feel very skewed, don't know if I like this...

"Which war did you sirvivde?"

"All of them."

Badass moment

Blackmailed by a child

Your making the sword out to be aqua