Reviews for Help from a Stranger (Up for Adoption) |
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Jebest4781 chapter 18 . 11/1/2015 Well damn this was epic and loved the details a lot |
buterflypuss chapter 18 . 11/1/2015 good chap |
Mugetsu16 chapter 17 . 11/1/2015 The thing that bothers me is the giant plot hole in this story. In one of the early chapters when Naruto was speaking with Yoruichi in the doctor's office, he says something along the lines of Arthuria finding happiness or something, and then it cuts to what is heavily implied to be Saber eating a meal with Shirou. This also implies that she was already summoned, yet in this story she wasn't summoned until now? Furthermore, she can't even recognize her own Shadow Knight, much less the only man she ever had sexual relations with? Cheers, Mugetsu16 |
Hotstreak's crossover stories chapter 18 . 11/1/2015 I'd like to see Naruto and Yhwach go head to head. Two powerhouses fighting an epic battle is always amusing. |
Telron chapter 18 . 11/1/2015 lol good chapter and interesting developments as well |
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 18 . 11/1/2015 really, he needed Bankai? seriously, how nerfed is Naruto? |
kamikage86 chapter 18 . 11/1/2015 Starting to worry about you, glad your alive and well, keep up the awesome work. |
Lightrazer chapter 18 . 11/1/2015 Damn, Naruto managed to severe the connection to ywhach. |
Alex2909 chapter 18 . 11/1/2015 i will admit i did not expect quincies to drop by |
Jose19 chapter 18 . 11/1/2015 This chapter is kind of confusing because you have brought Fate Stay Night along with Bleach it kinds of makes it hard to follow the plot with so many Elements in this story. |
Guest chapter 17 . 10/2/2015 Can you updated this story it is really interesting |
fist of fury chapter 6 . 9/16/2015 what the hell you do know that there is such a thing as too is like you add a girl every chapter. |
NaruhinaloverUA chapter 17 . 8/3/2015 Nice and interesting story. Keep up the good work. Update soon. |
Kamencolin chapter 17 . 7/22/2015 Great work |
listohain chapter 17 . 6/2/2015 Very good story, dont drop it please :) |