Bambietta Basterbine I'd my guess on the quincy. I'm callin it now. I'll wait till you get there to find out. Just sayin, I'll call or now. Might I suggest a possible Shutara Senjumaru? She's fucking awesome.

glad naruto saved sakura so early. like how the grail war is progressing. cant wait for when saber realises who naruto is

This story took a huge nosedive once you stopped it being a bleach/Naruto story.

This was a decent chapter. The scene where Naruto saved Sakura was good and no one deserves to undergo what she did. the hollow thing sounds interesting to me and I look forward to seeing more of him in the future

I'm sorry, I really liked this story when it was a Naruto bleach cross over but adding in a third show, and a complicated one like fate zero/fate stay night is just too much. It's your decision and I'm glad I got to read the beginning best of luck.

Your grammar and spelling still need work :P

The good thing about God-like main chars is that they get to do stuff you always wanted to see happen in canon, like Zouken and Shinji getting erased from existence and Sakura getting rescued and cured from that sick, sick pit. Although I would think that Shirou should have been involved in some way so his relationship with Sakura could have evolved. Because the bad thing about God-like main chars is that they take too much of the spotlight from other main chars, especially in crossovers.

So poor Asura's soul ended up being where Naruto dropped off his inner hollow huh? Would have though Yami Naruto would have taken that burden (Man, there are way too many people inside Naruto).

I hope you add Saber to the harem since you insinuated that she was involved with him as well

Excellent chapter

Epic chapter keep it up!

I wonder if you'll ever have naruto catch up with the females he's helped in his travels?

Not bad at all. Nice that you update. Thank you.

I get that you like giving Naruto random ass powers and you like the Type:Moon universes, but do you really need to just randomly add in a grail war arc for the hell of it yet again? Also, why is it that you gave Naruto the Soukyouku and gave it such a stupid power? Giving Naruto such random powers when he's strong enough already just gets annoying and is way overused. Lastly, why is it that your to love ru crossover has so much better grammar than this one? I just don't understand how you can go from writing pretty well to writing kind of badly.

this was a good chapter and it was fun on what came up in the chapter here and liked on what came up. can't wait for more

nice bro. hoping that you do something like your "High School and Aliens" piece via 'multiverse experience' lol. though I do wonder about which version of 'L33t Horo' 's naruto will be involved. like the orange version of Archer-EMIYA or the Dead Apostle version. though I am still confused on the leftovers of the idiot magus that was Caster's first master, will they find it and pick it clean for their own agenda or to help get through the war? can't wait for more of this and your other pieces. until then, ja!

good chapter