This is now a Naruto/Bleach/FateStayNight Crossover.

Considering we came here only for the Naru/Bleach, this feels like a bait-n-switch.

I feel cheated.

-N

you fucking idiot show me the episode or manga issue that shows naruto with evan 1 scar? writers like you are the ones that destroy fanfiction no respect for caracter that others wrote, pathetic

when he talked about arturia in an earlier chap you had her sneeze, so she should have already been summoned as well

I have no idea who any of these people are, or what the fuck is going on. I came here for a naruto/bleach crossover, not a naruto/whatever the fuck this is

While I like this story... Naruto is absolutely a Gary Stu, no doubt about it at all. There is literally nothing that isn't Gary Stu about him at all in this. While you're a good writer, it seems like has no real personality or character development at all, at least compared to other stories like High School and Aliens.

I'm disappointed. Rangiku pointlessly used her bankai on Kira when she wouldn't have needed it at all. Actually, it would have been even easier for her to just use shikai. Her shikai is literally designed perfectly to fight Kira, he wouldn't even stand a chance, but her bankai is a hell of a lot less well matched against him, that was an idiot move on your part.

Man, I don't really read any Bleach fic (since I say it doesn't need as many fixing as Naruto) but you really know how to spice it up. I'm looking forward to seeing how Naruto's presence will affect the Grail War.

Pffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffft OMG THAT'S BRILLIANT! AKAMARU BEING SAJIN I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING AND I LOVE IT! GREAT FCKING JOB! XD

great chapter when do you plan to update it, i can't wait to see their reactions to naruto's true identity especially saber.

Hi, congrats on an awesome Naruto x Bleach crossover. Its one of the best I have read so far so hope you definately continue it.
So gonna rate the various aspects of the story :
1. Plot: 8/10.
Well the plot is good mostly followin canon and good mix of action, seriousness, romance and humor. But I felt that inclusion of Fate/Stay Night was too sudden and frankly unnecessary, it deviates from main plot and makes the story too long and a bit clumsy
2. Characters: 10/10
Naruto is of course awesome. So are Yoruichi, Rangiku and all the other girls. Good character development and they have both the depth and vibrancy.
3. Powers: 9/10
All the girls and support characters are pretty balanced and have awesome powers but I felt Naruto was a bit OP (actually currently he is pretty much in God-like category bordering on Broken Character category). Please make him have some limitations or make his enemies and other characters stronger. If the main character is too OP then the fights become boring becoz we already know the outcome.
4. Grammar and Spelling: 6/10
I am sorry but i had to give 6. There are a LOT of spelling and typo errors even with Beta. Grammar is mostly OK but the plz correct the spellings. (eg. Karakura is Katakura, tree is try etc.)
5. Relationship: 10/10
Relationship between the chatacters is nice and quite in depth. But please do make a few instances of friction between the chatacters to make it realistic esp between the Shinigami and the Arrancars. Also if you make it a NaruHarem plz limit it to 5-6 girls otherwise it becomes too clumsy but its upto you I guess.

4.3/5
cheers again on the awesome job and hope you take the points into consideration. :)

The way he is getting with the Harem he could make Issei a very jealous man in this story, and I want to see how these ladies adjust to the world of the Living.

The one problem here if Naruto's reiatsu if it keeps growing stronger he can stay in the world of the Living because his power would have dangerous effects on Humans because captains when they stay in the world of the Living have a Limiter on them so their power does't destroy everything around them.

I noticed that most of the ladies that he is attracting in his pairing are all bra busters to say and from all groups or ages.

This story is a lot of fun to read from so many points of view, and I want to see what type of impact he has on the Bleach story because normally Bleach is very sad and depressing with no happy ending at all for everyone involved.

My favorite pairing for Naruto is Orihime because I simply love her personality and everything else about her. I am noticing the pairings how in the world is Naruto going to handle such a diverse amount of girls like this.