looking through other reviews of last chapter it seems im not the only one that thinks you stuffed up with these crossovers, so yeah great writing style and awesome content, but i think you should get feedback from your readers sometimes, cause im pretty sure with last chapter you have lost a lot, and i tried to get through it cause of all the chapters leading up to here, but i couldnt so here is where i stop

in my opinion you are now bringing in too many crossovers, it was fine with just bleach naruto, i dont feel like i can continue reading anymore cause both the new crossovers you brought in this chapter i havnt seen, which is a shame cause i really liked this story before this chapter

Probably get this a lot, but please continue. Dont care how long it takes just as long is it is continued.

Update plz

Im dissappointed that naruto didnt just blitz through everything is there a difference if naruto is in his body or not

How op is naruto now where is kurama?

Is there an update planned it has been well over a years since the last update

This is bad writing. There's nothing cute or acceptable about some stupid woman attacking people at random because of their gender. Nor is there anything charming about some gluttonous idiot eating someone else's food without even asking.

This is just generic anime bullshit that ruins the story because it's such stupid, mindless behavior that is absolutely not acceptable. It's some kind of extension of the Japanese love for slapstick and awkward situations in their "comedy", and it's just awful.

Aside from that, your writing is just really bad. It's impossible to read. It's gibberish, especially when it comes to the dialogue.

Your writing is awful. It's like you don't even know how English is actually spoken, which is sad for someone living in the UK.

I vote for Sun sun

Cool Stuff.

Yo, update. It's been a year.

If you had a penny for every goddamn misspelling in this fic, you'd be rich as fudge.

nice

You really need to work on you grammer and spelling