Reviews for Help from a Stranger (Up for Adoption) |
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rainermoreno chapter 18 . 11/20/2016 Hope he beats them quincis, please update. |
What's it to yah chapter 7 . 11/8/2016 A bit late for my review to mean anything, but I must say, the smile with the aura thing is getting old. I hope it does not continue in the coming chapters. what's it. |
TomBoyOfDeath98 chapter 5 . 10/10/2016 I love this book, especially the parts where Naruto shows his smile. Cracks me up every time. |
Monster King chapter 18 . 9/21/2016 Good story i really liked it hope you finish it eventually because you did a fine job with it all in all |
Voice132 chapter 18 . 8/29/2016 Loved it:) |
Stormz chapter 18 . 8/12/2016 Great story just wanna know when the next chapters R coming? |
Fhernando chapter 1 . 8/12/2016 que buena historia la tuya |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/24/2016 you forget that naruto is alreday godlike yet you let him be defeated... |
NaruTardo2001 chapter 4 . 5/22/2016 It was okay in the beginning then it gets a bit confusing |
dark.muktadir chapter 1 . 4/19/2016 Really getting that creepy old guy stalker vibe from naruto. Its done really well and would find it creepy for now if he actually got with orihime. |
C chapter 18 . 3/20/2016 I really love reading this story of yours. Also I wanted to know, are Kukaku and Soifon still in Naruto's harem because I like their characters. Hope you update this story sometime because I like where this story is going. Also can't wait for the lemon you'll write when Naruto gets with one of the girls. If you don't do a lemon, I'll still read the story and like it. Keep up the good work and see you next chapter update. :) |
Azaira chapter 18 . 3/21/2016 I thoroughly enjoyed the story up until you added a second crossover. It just got weird after that... Like it's filler story or something. But that's just my opinion, I guess. |
usmcramirez1997 chapter 18 . 3/9/2016 Can't wait for the next chapter |
Squarekiddo chapter 12 . 2/24/2016 Honestly he seemed pretty weak considering his 2000 years old, what he did here he could've done with Kurama back at 16 But oh well, Im guessing plot protection, same in canon Bleach really. |
Squarekiddo chapter 11 . 2/24/2016 Seems abit weak for a bankai, but we didnt really get a good look I suppose, but they are supposed to make your 5-10x more powerful. |