Ill be blunt, its just my way, I dont much like your story, but it is okay as a time-waster, something I have alot of nowadays, however dont you think your taking this 'Gentleman' thing to far? his not really a gentleman, his just odd, you really think females like the response 'Ah, what material is it made of?' when showing lingeries/cloths for someone they like? not only that thats freaking weird, its like this whole gentleman thing is written by a young teen thats abit confused.

Rangiku is blonde? thought she had orange hair.
For shits and giggles I will look it up now.
I was right, I'm Ma Baker, put your hands in the air, and give me all your money!

You piece of shit. Reported. You are just fucking copying STRAIGHT from kenchi618 "true warriors never die". Go die in a hole scumbag.

wkwkwk Komamura actually was Akamaru ? well that was unexpected

Awesome fic from what I have read so far! The chapter was pretty awesome (Arturia-chan 3), great job on it!

FUCK YOU AND YOUR FATE STAY NIGHT TEASE! SHE BETTER SHOW UP LATER IN THE STORY BECAUSE OF THIS

awesome chapter, keep it up!

Of course the change in who heals Shiro will have consequences... Rin still has her trump card... :-)

i just finished the story GREAT can't wait for next chapter hope you update soon

Nice chapter man though I'm kinda wondering what happen to soifon being in the harem?

Tsunami from soul Eater?

Great story.

Love the story keep it up. Keep the harem just don't get rid of Nel, Apacci Mila Rose, Sung-Sun. Replace Mashiro with Isane Kotetsu and put Kiyone Kotetsu in it.

ahaha, nice!

Nice