This just... isn't a good story, for a multitude of reasons. It can be described as one long, inconsistent powerwank.

Everything and everyone seems to revolve around Naruto. Fuu and Akimi only seem to exist for Naruto's sake. The author briefly gave them lives of their own at the beginning of the story but their characters boiled down to a cheap love triangle. Fuu almost killed Akimi for dating Naruto. This is extremely out of character for her.

The powerscaling is bad, too. Naruto obviously outclasses his canon counterpart at least two-fold, but he couldn't win against Pain? Really?

Additionally, the romance and suggestive themes are shoehorned in here, I'm guessing so the author can be horny in their story and squeeze out maybe ten more reads from the audience. Why are Akimi and Naruto going out on dates when the rest of their organization is out fighting? They are more serious than that.

I won't get started on the poor grammar and formatting. I truly can't. Grammarly is free. Extreme laziness on the author's end.

Ah never mind there was a max range, forgot about that.

It's interesting that they already developed a system where they could pull the other members of Nightfall out of danger using Naruto's chakra rods but didn't use it again after Kumo.

Cancelado?

Seems kinda DUMB to not tell naruto about his parents NOW doesn't it? He's NOT IN konoha... Besides WHO THE F* cares? Those EYES of his are going to bring him FAR, FAR MORE ENEMIES than Minato ever made... That's almost "incidental" now! If Naruto can't "defend himself" with the powers of GOD? Then he's NEVER going to be able to... So you might as well just tell him everything! He shouldn't even NEED Jiraiya for defense... Look at it this way... The Sannin got their name because ALL three were defeated (while working together, IN THEIR PRIME) by Hanzo... Then Nageto comes along with the rinnegan and KILLS Hanzo WITHOUT any special training or anything else... Just gains the eyes and POPS OFF the guy that beat Jiraiya, Tsunade, and Orochimaru combined.

"Tell him I said thank you for keeping me as safe as he could"... NO HE DIDN'T! The third did exactly TWO things... JACK and SHIT! The third is about as useless as a screen door on a submarine! It's amazing to me that all authors, in an attempt to make naruto's life look SO MUCH worse, make the third ABSOLUTELY incompetent at his job! Incompetent, cowardly, senile and absolutely paralyzed by stupidity are the only ways to describe him! I see NOTHING of "the professor" in any depiction of him... And as for the title.. "God of the Shinobi"? Well, I can see why there are so many atheists! Nobody wants a brain-sick, craven deity after all.

As far as telling Jiraiya that he "was cared for and protected"?... That's just an OUTRIGHT LIE! That's such a load of horse shit that the third should BURST INTO FLAMES just for uttering it! There was absolutely NO "caring for"... and even LESS "protection".

How the heck do you see someone's EYE COLOR in the dark? street lamp or no street lamp, that doesn't make any sense, unless naruto now is sporting a BUZZ CUT, the shadows should be WAY TO DEEP to see anything like that. Hair color? I can kinda see that with lamps, but eye color is a pretty FINE detail...

Kinda depressing that everyone seems to think with their DICKS when mass murder and SLAUGHTER are on the horizon... When things depend on decisions that are made RIGHT then but their stupid little "things" are more important apparently... NOT REALLY SMART (epically if it's done for humor THAT DOESN'T EXIST... It's JUST NOT FUNNY... People should get it TOGETHER... peeping is just STUPID... it can be done so EASILY, it makes no sense to even be a thing. NOBODY CARES. Jiraiya IS a super perv.. But this is BEYOND important... SOMEONE that IS the "child of prophecy"... Someone that WILL KILL or SAVE the world... Somehow I don't think their pricks should even be involved! Kinda like sakura always thinking with her PUSSY... It just doesn't FIT. At some point, NOBODY cares if their "dick is getting wet".

So much hasnt been resolved and sometimes characters are just forgotten. I literally skip all the Sasuke parts as it's reading about a petulant child and it's all he's been since we were introduced. I don't like how the love triangle was handled. Naruto basically forgot his "friend" Fu existed. I got through the Pain Invasion and had to stop. Here's naruto going on dates and stuff when there are way more serious things that need to be addressed first. Like damn this story devolved into a shit show. You want a more complete story with a God like Naruto, go read legacy.

Had a lot of promise, was decently written and executed, very few typos and grammar issues. Would have been a fantastic read had it not been a bloated mess. This story would have been wrapped up several times over with the word count with enough left over for a spin-off. For being trained by legends Naruto is making amateur mistakes. Also the I really loathe the Orochimaru/Kabuto plot armor that all Naruto Fanfiction have. If it’s overplayed and annoying in canon it’s even worse in fanfiction. Overall, it’s a good story that ruined by its pacing and plot progression, coupled with an over done trope and ridiculous plot armor on two big side antagonists. Still a good read if you want to kill time and have nothing else to do.

Not even the eyes of god can beat the sunset genjutsu of youth

I really like the premise, an organization similar to Akatsuki but that operate completely different.

The Rinnegan should have stand as its own doujutsu, it was a way cooler that way. I can't understand Kishimoto's obsession with the Sharingan to the point to make the Rinne an evolution of that.

Bro seguirás la historia está es la mejor historia que e visto de Naruto y me gustó mucho

wait with all the souls he took including tobirama and hashirama shouldn't he also have their experiences in everything including battles,jutsus and all that

The Outer Path

the kage in suna are blood line so it would be temari or kankuro