Love this. Very cool fight and awesome writing. Well done!

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Fem Kyuubi sounds awesome! Though, at some point they would have to find a way for her to be on the outside and not in his mind scape.

You are doing a great job hope that itachi gets sasuke to join Yoinokuchi

NaruHina is BEST pair outside of NaruHinaHarem pairings. FACT.

Dam man I love this fanfic I feel off it around Pain arc due to life and all but I feel back in love with it when I came back during my winter break and finished it but I’m sad knowing this probably won’t be updated and this is the final chapter with so many dead ends like Temari’s mission, why Naruto forgot about kabuto being already confirmed, and other things anyway GL to the creator hope you enjoy your time in life if you are alive and thank you for this wonderful work

Don't know if you fixed it yet, but shoton? isn't it supposed to be hyoton?

love this story,hope you finish this masterpiece

It is a good story plz continue it and finish it

Narutos whole adoptive family got killed like some hours ago and now he's asking jiraiya for some cool jutsus? XD lmfao this story is so dumb

I want to know a single thing. Why is Naruto explaining his technique to the opponent he’s going to kill a few seconds later? Especially if he’s worrying for some reason that his friends are in danger.

This shit is becoming annoying. Instead of learning to use the rinnegan abilities better and combining them, he’s learning different dogshit elemental jutsus. Naruto’s Rinnegan should be way stronger than Nagato’s, because Naruto has a natural born dojutsu, while Nagato got Madara’s. He got several S rank jutsus, yet can’t seem to win against 6 paths? He also got sage mode, yet can’t overpower Pain? Bullshit. Use Shinra Tensei more, Asura path would be extremely useful, spawn 6 shadow clones.

That’s not entirely true. There is no such law that lets the new generation surpass the old one. Madara and Hashirama, while being a part of the old generation, are still stronger than any ninja ever. Madara and Hashirama had all their skills self taught, while the new generation like Naruto and Sasuke had teachers to teach them and guide them for a faster improvement.
The sage of six paths is still the strongest ninja ever and he’s basically the first shinobi to exist.

I thought it would be OP till you massively nerfed Susanoo. Faster speed is nice, but in front of the ultimate massive armour that towers over mountains, it becomes useless. You don’t need to be fast when you’re as big as a bijuu.

Passing the sound barrier is barely a feat in Naruto. Naruto dodged a light beam during the war arc in canon. Ninjas in general are extremely fast in Naruto. She should be at least a few hundred times faster than sound.