Reviews for Nightfall
RandomFanFictionFanatic chapter 3 . 9/29/2011
Nice, I'm quite interested in seeing where this will go : ) Seems like it'll turn out well, but please don't use NaruHina, that pairing is so overused it makes me cry.

I would be quite interested in seeing NarutoxKurotsuchi, not alot of FFs out there with that pairing.
lightningblade49 chapter 3 . 9/29/2011
maybe a possible pairing with the other female jinchuricki fu.
But it was me Dio chapter 2 . 9/29/2011
Please do not do it for pairing narutoxhinata
Cryptic Saiyan chapter 3 . 9/29/2011
here is hoping for naru-temari
But it was me Dio chapter 3 . 9/29/2011
Nukefox19 chapter 3 . 9/29/2011
Naruto and Mei would be nice to see, but if you do make it a small harem, I would like to see Naruto, Mei, Konan, and Samui.

Anyway, like I said in your other story, you should read over your chapters and fix mistakes. I found quite a bit of grammar mistakes.

That's pretty much it. Hoping to see an update soon.
Mrsoulfire chapter 3 . 9/29/2011
Hi, It's a good story but please don't make the story feature Naruto and Hinata cause a lot of great premises show that and the most of them sucks as they don't feature any character development as well as your plot is good and that but I think you will make your story suck if it's NaruHina
Cryptic Saiyan chapter 2 . 9/29/2011
ya know what? Let's upkeep the blonde tradition. Narutoxtemari!
Unspeakable-Hastur chapter 2 . 9/29/2011
Good story so far. Keep up the good work. :D
sertry chapter 2 . 9/29/2011
tstoldt chapter 2 . 9/29/2011
This looks really really cool its just plain awesome for pairing naruto mei kurotsuchi or samui or yugito
m6l99 chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Sephiroth owns u all chapter 2 . 9/29/2011
Awesome Story Please Continue
ddcj1990 chapter 2 . 9/29/2011
Good chapterI really like it alot I cant wait for the next chapter
Edward Eluric chapter 2 . 9/29/2011
Mucking awesome
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