There are so few Naruto Overlord stories, well few that are really good. I kind of like this story, though some parts I don't, though that's only my taste.

A great opening to a story, I hope you will update soon. Keep up the good work!

Sincerely, Pagemaster

Dude make some more

Awesome beginning.

I don't usually review; I rather dislike this site's review system, as I prefer to comment upon a story in it's entirety. That said, I do like the premise of this story and hope to see more of it soon. It has a unique feel in my opinion, and the only person who would make a better Overlord than Naruto would likely have been Itachi. Kudos!

Interesting. Please, continue.

great chapter i can't wait for the next update.

I don't like Madara here, but I can't wait to see the minions reactions once they get a feel of kyubi. That and they always have funny things to say about the good in people like Naruto. Looking forward to it!

Now this is interesting. Honestly I don't care much for Madara. I always preferred Orochimaru as the main bad guy since he had that evil look, and was visible practically the whole series.

Always, looking forward to more.

-Chrono

This might develop into a pretty good story, though I think User: Uzumaki Naruto is more promising. If decide to continue, I'll be following this story.

I thought Sage mode accelerated healing...

hmmm...no comment yet but it looks like it will be interesting

It's better than most others I've read. Good job.

great start please continue soon, cant wait to see how Gnarl corrupts Naruto in been the Overlord and start his conquest of the lands.

I can't really give an honest opinion at this moment . I will need a few more chapters to critic this story properly although it seemed ok i guess . Although I did notice a few gramatical errors here and threre.