Reviews for Vandread Zero
liberty86 chapter 13 . 1/24/2014
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The Emerald's Edge chapter 12 . 5/19/2013
Again a really good chapter. And once again you end with a very interesting scene. Cipher is dreaming about a split world with a small neutral or maybe safe spot in which she stands, but everything else around her is either lonely darkness or hell. Once again noting to the conflict within her.

This thing you're doing right here, keep doing it.
The Emerald's Edge chapter 11 . 5/19/2013
Hmm...This was actually a really good chapter, Cipher is teaching Hibiki the basics of boxing and of course there's the ending where clearly the Paksis has done something I'm guessing to keep the Galm team alive and Pixy is seeing two Cipher's fighting each other with a third trapped in a cage, really nice touch adding that to emphasize the growing conflict within Cipher.
Vader23A chapter 13 . 4/21/2013
Really nice way to end Stage 1 of Vandread Zero, Fae. It's nice to see Pixy and Cipher's relationship take a great step forward.

Looking forward to Vandread Zero: The Second Stage.
Vader23A chapter 11 . 4/4/2013
Really interesting chapter.

I have to say my favorite part is the cage where the two Ciphers are fighting, as if reflecting the conflict going on within Cipher.

Update soon.
The Emerald's Edge chapter 10 . 3/30/2013
Now you're stealing my lines...fantastic.

I think this might be my favorite chapter so far. Cipher has a bit of a breakdown which was a bit saddening, but its good character development. And then we have Pixy coming to her side...have to be an idiot to not see that there's going to be something between them later on.

Anyway keep it up Fae.
The Emerald's Edge chapter 9 . 3/30/2013
Alright, Cipher is...I'm not sure what to say about her. First she seems to not really care about the situation and takes everything in stride, then she goes to giving everyone the cold shoulder excluding Pixy and now she's said to Hibiki that she doesn't care what if anything happens to him or the other members of the crew...Gotta say, either this is an extreme case of tough love or...yeah.

And it seems Cipher is beginning to wonder if she has feelings for Pixy, or at least asking herself if she does. Can't wait to see how that turns out.
The Emerald's Edge chapter 8 . 3/30/2013
Knock knock. Who's there? Rabat getting his a** kicked.

I want to say called it with Cipher beating the you know what out of the guy, but its less brutal than I thought it would be. Then again I guess we can't have it too bad otherwise the rest of the crew would probably be afraid of her.

And more of Cipher's past is revealed along with it all, but I'm still focused on Cipher delivering a good ol' smack down on Rabat.

Nice going this round Fae.
Vader23A chapter 10 . 3/29/2013
A Wonderful, emotional chapter. I can understand what Cipher's going through. I mean, if you were thrown 100 years into the future and caught right in the middle of the battle of the two genders and knowing that you can't go back to your time period, wouldn't you feel depressed?

It's nice knowing that Cipher is starting to smile.

Update soon.
Vader23A chapter 9 . 3/26/2013
Another great chapter.

Will Cipher eventually forgive Pixy for betraying her? And is she falling for him? Oh, such questions waiting to be answered.

Update soon.
Vader23A chapter 8 . 3/24/2013
Nice chapter. I have to say my favorite part is Cipher opening up a can of whoop a** on Rabat.

Update soon.

If you feel stuck on this story, you can use chapters from both stages of Vandread Ace to help you out.
The Emerald's Edge chapter 7 . 11/20/2012
Now we're getting somewhere. A good portion of Cipher's past is revealed and she also says she's ready to start trusting Pixy again.

I still say chapter 6 is my favorite so far, but this is still a really good one.

Still a lot of questions left, but I can wait for the next update.
The Emerald's Edge chapter 6 . 11/20/2012
Ok first because it needs to be mentioned, you made a bit of an error while writing. Pixy set the photo back in Cipher's room, but is somehow still carrying it around. Just something I thought I should point out.

With that aside I really enjoyed this chapter, and can say so far its my favorite, but we're only halfway through Stage 1 so it'll most likely change eventually.

I love that Cipher learns how to pilot the Vanguard almost immediately after climbing into one speaks very well of her piloting skills.

But what's got most of my focus is Cipher hesitating to destroy a photo of her and Pixy, and at the end wishing everything could return to the way it was before. It shows that she's still a normal person like everyone else and leaves a great bit of room for the readers to respect her as a character.

Great job Fae, moving on to chapter 7 now.
The Emerald's Edge chapter 5 . 11/18/2012
Pretty good job on this one Fae.

Loving the choice of attire you've given Cipher, Claire was always a favorite of mine from Resident Evil and its good to see her in...well something of an appearance.
The Emerald's Edge chapter 4 . 11/18/2012
Well, I know I'm long overdue on the reviews and I apologize for that.

Good chapter though, seems a bit rushed to me, but you definitely out work into it all the same.

Love the Tarot card bit, always had an interest in those things.

And Cipher has chosen to end her friendship with Pixy...that's a downer I was hoping for something like "Sorry I tried to kill you Cipher" and with Cipher just not caring and continuing to be a smart ass like outside the elevator, "Ah don't worry about it we're cool, it was real fun we should do it again sometime".

Anywaaaaaaay...on to chapter 5.
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