|Reviews for The World's Shortest Hunger Games|
| BerryRueHermione chapter 19 . 7/10
I cant guess who the victor who talked to Paisley was. (I probably will if i think long enough though)
| Freezymint chapter 19 . 4/8/2015
This is amazing. Update soon, and thankyou
| BlueDreamer31 chapter 2 . 3/26/2014
This story is absolutely amazing. It's written as well as the real hunger games practically and I'm already in love with it! I got my wish when I asked for a fourth hunger game book!
| Ibbonray chapter 10 . 3/25/2014
Lovely story. Your writing is intriguing and flawless. However, earlier in this chapter, Dia points out that Johanna Mason lost her family in friends. That's correct, but Dia wouldn't know that, because Johanna hasn't won her Games yet. Although I don't think it specifies which Games she was in in the books, it's widely assumed she won either during the 69th or 71st Games, give or take a few. Johanna wouldn't have won before the 66th Games, which Paisley has won.
I think that altogether, I dislike the Game time she was placed in. I assume that they would enforce the laws about the tokens much earlier in the Games era, around the twenties or thirties instead of the 66th. Not to judge your choice- I just think she would be better placed a little further back in time.
Despite all this, I think Paisley is a beautiful character. Her near obsession with colours is touching, and your idea to mass murder all of the tributes using her token was extremely innovative. I love how you've taken the escort and made her Paisley's friend- it goes against the stereotypical "despicable escort."
Dot is my favourite- I'm quite frightened about what President Snow's intentions for him are. Maybe he'll let Paisley grow fond of him and then kill off the Avox boy, to her utter dismay. I'm not sure yet. I cannot wait to read the rest.
Tone and voice are great, grammar is adequate, and this story is by far one of the most creative fanfics I've read. It's beautiful.
Best regards. -Ibbonray
| Hp princess no.1 chapter 19 . 2/21/2014
OMG, u have to update! Please update, please! This story is sooooooooo amaysing. Update soon.
| HungerG94 chapter 19 . 1/28/2014
This was a great chap. Sucks that Chaye died, but like you said, shit happens. I'm glad she was at peace with her death and left the note for everyone to see. And giving the middle finger: priceless.
I'll assume that it was Johanna who came in, yes?
| R.I.PxGlee2015 chapter 19 . 12/31/2013
| Face Towards the Dawn chapter 19 . 12/12/2013
Of course Lark doesn't have time to open his eyes before the cannon goes, he's DEAD. His head is no longer attached to his body. Those eyes aren't opening.
*cough* Sorry. Anyway.
You said that Seven and Eight don't like each other - you know, I've never thought about that. We don't really see much of the districts' relationships, some of them probably do have rivalries.
And Johanna Mason gets a cameo!
I loved her interview scene in the movie. Of COURSE Johanna says something that has to be bleeped out! So perfect.
| Lya200 chapter 19 . 12/10/2013
| Lightning at Noon chapter 19 . 12/10/2013
I'm definitely loving your story. Using the beads to blow up the pedestals was an ingenious idea on your part, and Paisely's. And I'm sad to see Chaye go too. I liked her spunk.
But you've written an amazing story so far! Update soon
| TheOtherFriendlyFinnick chapter 18 . 11/26/2013
I AM HERE TO SCREAMMMM!
Btw, another good chapter, can't wait for more death and destruction in the HG.
Anyway back to SCREAMMMING!
OMG, OMG, when she shot the turkey and saw Marvel? That was pretty smart portrayal.
AND THE ARENA? EXACTLY HOW I IMAGINED IT!
AGHHH! THE CORNICOPIIA AND THE DISTRICTS WITH THEIR SALUTES AND EFFIE AND THE CAPITOL PEOPLE AND JOHANNAH (lol she was funny, Peeta and Haymitch in the elevator... ;)...)
THERE WAS SO MANY PARTS WHERE I WANTED TO CRY, BUT I COULDN'T CAUSE IM A GUY AND I WAS THERE WITH MY FRIENDS, ARGGGHEDFSLDKFJ:FSD:BGJRHG:BBR:GJSDLBJHG!
Anyway, your turn...
what was your favorite part and stuff?
are you team Gale or Peeta?
and anything else you want to scream about!
P.S. sorry for sending this message as a review...
It is just I started writting here and then I started screaming soo...
| Not Just A Reader - A Fangirl chapter 18 . 11/25/2013
this was so quick. i want to watch catching fire soooo bad, but mum wont let me go with my friend. :( well i'll watch it sometime. ill make sure. great work anyway, keep it up!
| End.To.Begining chapter 17 . 11/22/2013
Clifhangers annoy me too. You should really update soon! I must know what happens! Ahhh. Get chapter by the way.(:
| iRiDeScEnT DrReAm chapter 17 . 11/20/2013
| TheOtherFriendlyFinnick chapter 17 . 11/13/2013
You better update soon otherwise I...
won't get to read it soon?
But I can kinda guess what happens, he's the guy who wanted an allience isn't he?
Yeah well please update soon...