Reviews for Dashes, Dots, and Pegasus Spots |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! Hope you're doing well. I wanted to be straightforward your story title caught my eye, and I got excited to check it out. You’ve written it beautifully, and I really enjoyed reading it! I was wondering if you’d be interested in turning your story into comic pages. If you like the idea, feel free to contact me on any of these platforms: Email: trippsyyarts gmail . com Discord: tripsydraws Twitter: tripsydraws Looking forward to hearing from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was really nice. Rarity took good care of Rainbow. And Rainbow's pegapox sounded terrible. Tornados are scary! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL I love this now Dash thinks Bobo is evil |
![]() ![]() Cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! It is very nice, and nice to read. Blessings and thanks for sharing it with us! |
![]() ![]() ow no! |
![]() ![]() Amazing! I loved it! Especially Sweetie Bell! So adorable! |
![]() ![]() Oh, Sweetie Belle, hiding Bobo in Rainbow Dash's saddle bag...smart filly. Rainbow Dash: Ahh, home sweet home... (opens saddle bag and finds Bobo's creepy eyes staring at her) AHHHH! WHAT THE HAY?! RARITY! SWEETIE BELLE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, I love this story! He is adorable! It is full of adventure Rainbow! great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story! Sweetie Belle always wins! My sister used her toy Sweetie Belle as a game piece once and beat me at Monopoly three times in a row. Oh, and Rainbow's PJs sounded awesome! I have only one more thing to say, foolish, foolish Cloudkicker. (I thought Cloudkicker was a girl?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() xD Sweetie Belle |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kudos on this whole story. It was very well put together from start to finish. All of the characters (particularly Dash and Rarity) were perfectly in character – particularly in regards to the excellently written dialogue. The plot itself was just as good – something that I could easily see being made into an actual episode. Once again, great job. I’ll definitely be checking out your other stories. (Also, I really liked the title; it's really quite clever). |
![]() ![]() ![]() CUTE! I 3ed it! But Cloud Kicker is a she. GREAT STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ur an awesome writer :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great ending I actually squeed at that hug part :) Poor Rainbow when she gets home she'll be so freaked out. |