|Reviews for Bite your Tongue|
| Light on the Horizon chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Great story :)
| Reader00001 chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Oh my gosh, I love the story! I love how witty you write the characters and they don't look OOC. I love it. I've become your fan!
| kci47 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
"Goodness, what a compliment. Would this be the cousin who's too dim to string five words together or the cousin who joined the Death Eaters the second her NEWT scores came in?"
| JPLE chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
What I really enjoyed (aside from your excellent characterization), was the dialogue. The use of snappy, short sentences really made the dialogue seem fast paced and witty, which is very Sirius, in a way.
What I didn't like was the fact that Lily and Sirius kissed (come on, James would slaughter him!) but seemings as that was the aim, I can't really fault this.
| FloatingCloudBadger chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
That was brilliant! :)
| pen7sword chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Awww that's so great! First kiss? Really? I want to read more of this couple!
| rolljordanroll chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
hilarious! she actually bit his tongue!
| Singing in the Dead of Night chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Ha ha! That was really cute! Good job!
| alljuststories chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
LOL, wonderful drabble. I love the Romance/Humor ones. They're so cute!
| ILoveHarryPotterForever chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
Haha, ooh Sirius and Lily. You've gotta love them. :) Great story!
| danzori chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
This was awesome, loved it.
| NeverBeenDarkMarked chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
I really like this :) They were very in character, and I loved Sirius' obvious arrogance XD The "bite your tongue" thing was very funny :D Well done!
| clasch chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
First of all, let me say: LOL. And again: LOL. I had to read that last section twice before bursting out into peals of laughter! xD "You said to!" "But I didn't mean it! D:" That's adorable! And "Oh, cry me a river, build a bridge and jump off of it." Also: LOL. This story is so cute! I think you really captured the arrogance of Sirius and the implied character-work the J.K. did! I only saw one spelling error: focused is spelled with only one 's'. One note on the story, Remus as the "smart one" of the group, so I don't think he would have needed the answers to the homework. Maybe Peter would have been a better option for that specific example. And as I reread the A/N, I am glad to report that I was right about the time frame! Yay! :) I really enjoyed it! Good job!
| Asking Me Where My Love Grows chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Aw, I really liked it.
The pairing is interesting and I feel that you pulled it off really well. Lots of sarcasm and teasing.
lol, the kiss scene was actually really good and very Sirius-esque. "Bite your tongue." "Do it for me."
but then she bit him and I was sad. xD
It was sitll nice though and I'm kind of glad that they didn't get together because that would be just too easy.
Good luck on Lupin/Regulus. :)
| obsessivegirl73 chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Hmmm I just can't imagine SiriusLily working out that well...guess I like her with James and Sev too much. ah wel, you still wrote it very well. :) great job! :D