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| francis2 chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Great story. Steve in so much angst!
| Jazmingirl chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
wow youre on a roll keep going
| Maz101 chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Well someone at that hospital deserves to be sued for that emotional trauma!
Loved this..."He's never wanted to cause that much pain to his partner. His friend. His." Neat structuring.
| montez chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
God that was scary in the first part, but by the end I pitty the nurse who gave Steve the wrong info if he ever sees her again, hell Chin and Kono probably ripped into her once they learned what happened.
| maxie chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
I enjoyed your story even though I'm not really a fan of slash. A suggestion for your writing style...please consider using something to denote when you change to a different scene, etc. It is distracting to the flow of the story when you change points of views, locales, whatever and there is no warning. Mahalo.
| shadowdweller25 chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
What the hell? I know it was a mixup but what kind of nurse delivers news like that?
Anyway, I liked it.
| Blood Zephyr chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Deja Vu! I feel like I've read this before...