Reviews for There Coming!
Cancer chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
This was fucking awful. Please consider killing yourself. If I ever see a fanfiction worse than this I'll let you know but I highly doubt it. As a high level FanFiction Critic, I see good fanfics when I read em. But this... You singlehandedly destroyed my faith in the FanFiction community. I will probably go and hang myself after this... Maybe even drink some vodka, since thats all you made knuckles talk about. KNUCKLES ISNT EVEN A DRUNK YOU FUCKING RETARD IM DONE WITH THIS WEBSITE FOREVER. FUCK YOU AND YOUR STUPID CANCER FANFICTIONS IM GOING BACK TO MODERATING MY LITTLE PONY PORN.
SonicHero12 chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
Sonicman88 chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
That was funny
targeted50 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
you really had to kill them? and shadow didnt "abandon" maria you derp. idiot.
SuperSonic62EpicMario99 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
"CANT I AT LEAST HAVE ONE MORE DRINK OF VODKA!" LOL. buuuut when the characters were doing actions, you could have at least put symbols before and after the action. (Example: *buys Quick Revive* ) just trying to help! :D its a minor mistake. :)
Dndchk chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
It's a great idea but the spelling isn't very good and it's hard to follow...
RetroGamer chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
You're an idiot.

First off, how the hell does Shadow get to the stage area without buying any doors?

Secondly, the AK-74u is on the complete othe side of Kino than Speed Cola. The only weapons near Speed Cola are the Stakeout and the MP-40. Frankly I'm glad you made the people die at the end so that we don't have to read another of you're Sonic-CoD:ZOMBIES storie ever again.