|Reviews for This Changes Everything!|
| hjm1219 chapter 3 . 10/7/2014
The past tense of see is saw, not seen. You only use seen with a helper such as had seen or have seen.
| mitch404 chapter 26 . 8/23/2013
I like this story.
| clumsydolphin chapter 22 . 5/6/2013
Okay, now I have to blame you for keeping me up all night reading! So when I am a grumpy witch tomorrow it's all your fault for writing this addictive story! Five thumbs up, if I had five lol. great chapter, great story!
| clumsydolphin chapter 9 . 5/6/2013
Hey, I love this story as much as the one I read before this one, your marriage law story. I do think I have an answer though as to why you aren't getting the reviews and attention your stories deserve. You can PM me if you would like and I can tell you privately. You are definitely going on my favorite author list for sure! You have an incredible feel for stories!
| momma chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
these just keep getting better ! I love em sis !
| matches9524 chapter 6 . 6/20/2012
I like the concept of this, but I am having an incredibly hard time reading your fic.
It's very poorly written. I suggest you reread with a critical eye every chapter before you post. Look for grammar (grammar! grammar! grammar!-"Hermione seen his face" is Alabama grammar, not what you would use in narration in material other people are trying to read), spelling, and don't sound so stilted (it's okay to use slang and conjunctions in dialogues, because that's how people talk-not in narration, but in dialogue it's almost necessary to make it believable, rather than reading two robots having a discussion).
Again, I love the fic, but use the other side of your brain, flip from creative to logical, and reread with that perspective. Edit. It will make a world of difference.
I will keep reading though, because I'm intrigued, and I want to find out what happens.
| Mila Pink chapter 15 . 3/10/2012
Tragedy is a little silly.
Besides her almost being raped, killed, now the bastard goes and kills his parents?
What a horror. he is asking to die.
| Mila Pink chapter 2 . 3/9/2012
Who is her father? It is not Tom, right?
I loved it. Very interesting, I'll read more.
| Mila Pink chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
I found it interesting. I will read.
And not much has changed his name.
| JaneA0202 chapter 26 . 2/13/2012
hmm, the story was well written and interesting...I just didnt like that Draco was Veela...I generally dont like when Draco is Veela...because it reminds me vampires and werevolves and I dont like those themes in HG/DM fanfics...but I did read till the end and other than that, I did like it...maybe Draco was a bit mushy with Hermione, but I didnt mind much.
| BellaTallin chapter 26 . 1/12/2012
I really enjoyed this story, it was very sweet and I very much liked the plot. My only issue was the conversations were a little difficult to read and keep track of who was talking when you blocked them together. It's easier to keep track when you start a new paragraph when a different person speaks. But other then that this was a wonderful story, well done!
| Cissi418 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Yeah, a completed veela tale!
Can't wait to delve into the plot. Thank you for sticking it out. Incomplete fics drive me nuts!
| Liverebe chapter 22 . 11/22/2011
i miss you! i hope you are having fun over there but i also hope you get back soon xxxxx
| imy321 chapter 22 . 11/2/2011
| Kermit 304 chapter 22 . 10/30/2011
Too bad about your Internet. We'll wait for you, I'm sure. You just can't leave us wondering about this meeting for too long, can you?