What?!

Uhhhh oh

Hiii!
I actually am an anoymous reader mostly skimping over the stories , reading them but never commenting. But your story forced me too. Its absolutely beautiful! The way you write the scenic details .. its so mesmerising. I understand how the comments made you feel though , there is alot of drama but I dont think people understand that everyone's life is actually sappy drama like a bad comedy show maybe.
Anyway , I feel that returning Edward got lucky chances at the luckiest of times that made him redeem himself like he wanted. Not everyone gets that but he must be the lucky ones.
I loved the story line , sometimes influence of people do force bad things to happen and we regret it over time. But maybe just maybe giving a chance on forgiveness is always enough.
At the end all I want to say is that I absolutely loved it.

I like your story, but is it wrong of me to wish Bella didn't take Alice and Edward back? I mean, Edward would've been a lot closer due to savving Carlie, but said girl was a huge victim as well. I think Bella should have accepted her apology but not retain the frienship. She deserved better.

Interesting plot idea, not very much character growth, a little too much drama. I think the idea was great, what happened to Alice, then they were decieved by Tanya, but Carlie's second recital was ridiculously full of drama. The out takes detracted from the story completely, you should have put them in a separate story. Way too much going on in this story, the characters were not well-written in the sense that none of them seemed like real human beings. I couldn't see them as this three dimensional person with humanoid feelings and thoughts and emotions. They all seemed over the top. A lot of times you jumped around too much, which meant following the story was difficult.

Tbh I don't really like the POV outtakes... I was fine with them when they provided insight on what happened in the past and how they all felt, but now it's just all so long and it feels unnecessary. Maybe you should have put it aside in a different story instead, then some people could read it optionally. This is the second time I've come back to try and read the story. I gave up the first time because it's just so so very long and tiring to read. I'd love to skip over the outtakes but I'm afraid I'd miss something important. No offense though, I'm not criticizing your work or telling you how to write. It's a really great story, but it could be better. :)

Just wanted to write a note and tell you I truly enjoyed this story

I'm stopping here. This would've been a nice story if you hadn't put so many POV's.

Complete crap and it ruins the story, such a waste.

i think i forgive Him now

ugh. the only thing the urks me is that MY name is Jazmine

ive never loved aro more

damn...i really want to cry

I love you took the scenic route to tell your story, the extra detail made the characters into real people not just cameos. I enjoyed the shades of gray rather than the black and white that too many seem to prefer.
Thank you
:)-J

Hay. That's all I'm gonna say

OMG! WHY?! Well we know that she wants to speak with him so maybe that is a sign that its going to start a new beginning with them soon. The only thing that puts a spanner in the works is the way she is with Demitri. Bella just willingly went into his arms and she felt comfortable, hm... what could that mean?! My personal opinion oj Demitri is that there is something going on wirh that man. I think that he is not all that he seems to be. And I wonder of thats what Jenks is wanting to say to Edward instead of the situation with Demitri finding out! I can't wait to see what happens next!