Please tell me the definition of a flamer,

Great job! Definitely brought Reyna forth in a light she much more deserves! :D

Keep writing amazingly!

-Nike

This almost made me cry. :,P

that was beautifully written and i really enjoyed it :)

Oh gosh! Jason looks like his mind is being split into half...
The awkward moment when the great Roman praetor has no idea what to do and keeps repeating Reyna's name.
Awesome one!
Also, I hate stalking forums and blogs...
:D

Dang girl. This made me cry.
The words are, like, so deep. :P

I loved it so much. Reyna was a bit OOC but who cares? Reyna's [most of the time] OOC in all the other fanfics I read.
Two thumbs up! :]

I like this one better than your other Jeyna oneshots. It kind of reminds me of the beginning of Peter Pan, in a twisted way. Great job. Where do you come up with these things? It amazes me how well-thought out these are. I could never do this.

This was AMMMMAAZZZIIIIINNNGGG!

You should do a second chapter where Jason finds Reyna and sends a note.

that was good. Mind. you, when you told me to review this, I read it SIX times...I really appreciate your writing, especially since you picked up SOME PJO...keep writing :)

Love it. I was never a fan of Jasper since Piper was never his real girlfriend, she's a mary-sue, and she's way too possesive(anyone else notice how much she sounds like Drew when she threatens Drew). Not to mention liking Jasper is basically liking Percy ending up with some random girl that has fake memories of him. Im so glad you let Reyna have a chance. Jayna for the win.

Yay! Reyna has a chance! Very descriptive.

okay that was AMAZING!

This was beautiful. :'D

Am I the only one who noticed the connection between TLH and the original story of Jason and the Argonauts? I mean, seriously.

1. Medea, a charmspeaker, angered Aphrodite because she refused to fall in love. So Aphrodite MADE Medea fall in love with Jason.

2. After Medea's help, Jason met another girl. I think her name was... Hesione? Not sure. But her name meant 'Princess.'

Then, in TLH:

1. Piper, a charmspeaker, thinks she's in love with Jason and helps him because of fake memories. (Aphrodite's words: "You can see possibilities because you're my daughter!")

2. Jason remembers a possible girlfriend from his past: Reyna, whose name means 'Queen'.

Weird, isn't it? Although I hope HoO doesn't end up like the original story, because Medea kills the girl Jason really likes... then she kills Jason's daughter... and suicides.

... ...

That was random.

Reyna, Jason's shadow, huh?

This is interesting, I'm not sure how to react to such a low self-esteemed Roman, but its definately a different POVof Jason too.

Ostracized for standing by her, then a hero, then gone...returned with no memory of her, to following her to the ends of this earth...its VERY different, but I like it.

I'm not a bit fan of Jasper...if only because it started with faked emotions and lies and then grew into an Aphrodite daughter claiming him as if he was a toy doll or something...

...teenagers and their immaturity...