Reviews for Not So Blind
happychica chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
You write very nice stories - I've been enjoying working through your list. Lots of fun without compromising character traits.

I've noticed though that you tend to end your pieces with sentences that...aren't final. They feel like the beginning of a paragraph or another chapter, but then just stop. Is that intentional?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
It was good. I recommend you totally remove the last paragraph. It doesn't fit the tone or style of the rest of the story and it throws off the climax.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
I liked the kiss thing. It's a good story. Will you write a sequel please?
Sailor nova 1 chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Did'nt care for the kiss thing but well writen!
Loopstagirl chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Aww, I really enjoyed this! Nice one!