Reviews for Ha'iole My Way
Runner043 chapter 7 . 10/11/2011
Just finished reading your HF-0 stories. Very well done. Too bad CBS didn't write the scripts to fit your scenario, I'd have liked it better.
francis2 chapter 7 . 10/5/2011
This was fun. Thank you!
francis2 chapter 4 . 10/5/2011
Yippie!
francis2 chapter 2 . 10/5/2011
Good idea for a different spin on the show. I'm reading on.
crokettsgirl chapter 7 . 10/3/2011
Finally got to the epilogue..lol...Now I read so many stories I don't know. But I think it was one of yours where Steve found a place for Danny and it was Mammo who rented it? If wrong sorry.

I liked the cemmetary scene and Grace embarrassing her Danno..lol...How the whole team are with him and he see how he now needs them so much. And also Danny sees he isn't alone anymore. The rest was really good tie up. I like they stayed the night and realized they couldn't be together 24/7 or they'd kill each other. lol...Excellent story can't wait for your next. I really enjoyed this. Sue
wotumba1 chapter 7 . 10/2/2011
very nice story, can imagine it happened like that
crokettsgirl chapter 6 . 10/2/2011
Loved this follow up tying up lose ends chapter. Funny about the red sea parting as the governor walked by. I am glad all is taken care of and love how you thought it out and included so much...great
shirik chapter 6 . 10/2/2011
Again i'm thinking that if this is what is about to happen i'll fall off my butt;-
shirik chapter 6 . 10/2/2011
Again i'm thinking that if this is what is about to happen i'll fall off my butt;-
shirik chapter 5 . 10/2/2011
Oh my god this chapter is totaly brilliant! i think you literaly solvex the whole case! for real! in the episode 0202 when steve entered the office almost catching jenna he made a look toward her that made me feel likehe knows everything. he had that almost unseen half smirk when asking her what she wad doing so i'm sure he knows all about her. you brought up his past with cia and nsa and i hope the production of the show will use his background also. this is such an important point in steve's padt that wad not mentioned befor. i think you did an excellent job so far, you really tied all loose ends and it's like you are one step above! I really can't wait to see if things will happen as you put them. usually i like it the other way around:-)
crokettsgirl chapter 5 . 10/2/2011
That was fantastic how you had this whole chapter devoted to telling Jenna and then Wo Fat that Steve was the puppet and not Wo Fat. How Wofat thought they had nothing on him and how the two went back and forth with telling Wo fat things that made the man know he was truly wrong about Steve. the final kick was the governor being alive that was great I love it. I like her better than Denning so far until I found out what she did. Great job. sue
crokettsgirl chapter 4 . 10/2/2011
I love the guise here about what Danny and Steve were doing in order to get Wo Fat. Also how you grazed over the opening episode because I really don't like reading script in a story..lol...I know what happened and you told enough to allow the reader to see where we were in the story. I love Hesse getting it and Jenna too. I had just starting liking her too. Great job. Sue
sherry57 chapter 7 . 10/1/2011
Thanks for a very enjoyable story hon. Now on the look out for your next one!
crokettsgirl chapter 3 . 10/1/2011
I enjoyed reading how Chin felt and how Kono felt. Both had some differences in their feeling but it was very good doing this chapter. Poor Kono, I feel for her to go through this but her thinking was right. Loved it. Sue
sherry57 chapter 3 . 10/1/2011
Just read chapters 2 and 3...great hon! The team is really a family in this and the trust level is fantatsic. I like the parallel story to the series...the same but different. It's working really well. Looking forward to more.
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