|Reviews for Forgiveness|
| KAISRE chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Oh goodness, this story flows so beautifully, especially for an AU-oneshot ;c; I think this is the first piece of writing of yours that I've read, and dear god I wish I could write like you LOL There's a good balance of dialogue and description and I love how they just flow into each other, especially between events.
I'm guessing Eraqus died? Oh lordy, he always get's the short end of the stick, poor Terra ;_; Good thing he has Aqua and Ven there for him.
(A multi-fic of this would be totally boss, just sayin' ;P )
| MonMonCandie chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Aww, this was so sweet when it got to the end. :) Terra...I'd imagine he'd be a jock with his bodybuild. LOL XD It's interesting to see how he came back around to hanging out with Aqua after things changed between them, what with him falling into another group. I think everyone can understand that feeling of friendships being changed because of school stereotypes...or something like that. Sorry I'm not coherent. I'm really tired. LOL
Either way! This was really good and very well written. I spotted like one must and that was you meant to say "bus" instead of "pus." XD