|Reviews for Unlucky|
| BluRosefanCreativity chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Maybe a bit short and you should explain a bit more about the characters
Quite good though
| Elixire J. Crow chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
I'm also love crack shipping. I think his (almost) last words "lady in need" replaced with "damsel in distress". It suits him well.
And could accept the plot about his mother death, because if i'm not mistaken Grimsley's family was once renowned a noblemen..
| KHLegacy chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I'm not sure who Grimsely is but this was neat! good job it was nice that he puts a rose on his mother's grave! congrats on having nearly a hundred stories!