Reviews for I need you Brother!
chandelure chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
That was adorable~ And sad, too, of course. But mostly adorable.

I loved the plot, and I think Ruby was very well written - though, as you said, Silver is OOC. Not a terrible amount, though, so that's fine.

The problems were mostly in the grammar, so I mean the spelling, the punctuation, etc. I think if you worked on that in the future you could get a lot better~ I also think that you should try and discover some sort of thing that you used as a writing style that's all your own, which would be wonderful, since your plot was lots of fun. Also, I think that in the future, using something like "WTH" shouldn't happen. Using text talk should only really be used when the character is actually texting. But that's not a big deal.

And Silver/Ruby! Never seen that one before, but it's not a bad thing.


SpecialPikachu chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Yay! Another story from you, I love it 3

My favorite part is at the end, when Blue accused Silver for stealing Ruby! Hahaha that's so funny lol

Thank to your fic and now I'm starting to like this pairing too XD