Reviews for Goomboid Prime
Xample chapter 1 . 3/5/2017
I like this so far, Im hoping for Mario X Samus pairing. I know it's weird, but thats the beauty of it, opposites attract y'know? Anyway artful literarature right here. BTW start witing again please.
ShadowHero1927 chapter 16 . 7/16/2012
You did an AWSOME job of writing this story, and that is a 100% honest and true fact.

I also have a 100% honest belief that you should write a sequel to this story.
PyroSolracIII chapter 4 . 12/14/2011
Haven't read that far ahead yet, but I wouldn't be surprised if Zelda or Captain Falcon have a reference down the road.
phanthom theif kid chapter 16 . 12/8/2011
i see how mario conviently left out what happened the LAST time he tried baking.

wait a minute, according to the super mario wiki, Torte is a Terrapin, which are simply armored koopas.

wait another minute! if the koopas were really koopans, were the goombas really goomboids? if so, why didn't they try to attack other than simply walking forward?

it's been a great fic!
phanthom theif kid chapter 14 . 11/29/2011
this is an amazing story. i'm gonna be sad to see it end.
phanthom theif kid chapter 12 . 11/21/2011
better than i'll probably be able to...

Yay! flying pigs!
phanthom theif kid chapter 11 . 11/19/2011
excited chapter title!

well, mario vs. mario has happened at least twice before. i think he can handle it.
phanthom theif kid chapter 10 . 11/15/2011
yay! comic relief!

the ironic thing: in the mushroom kingdom, tripping on a rock and falling on a goomba kills it, not you.
phanthom theif kid chapter 9 . 11/11/2011
possibly the planet's namesake?
phanthom theif kid chapter 7 . 11/3/2011
hmm. if i'm right, that's the goomboid that wendus befriended earlier in the series, isn't it?

if not, don't blame me. i've never played anything but the origional metroid, and in that i gave up in one of those really repetitve vertical rooms.
phanthom theif kid chapter 5 . 10/19/2011
did you know that birdley is the name of a tiny bird in mario and luigi bowser's inside story?
phanthom theif kid chapter 2 . 10/5/2011
interesting. i like it!