Reviews for Unforgivable Romance
Guest chapter 33 . 10/22/2014
More please! I would love to read the rest of this story and find out what happens in the battle. Does the Olympic Coven fight the Whitlock coven? How does Bella play into the battle and do the Volturi get involved or is this one of Aro's games? Do we find him sitting back and watching to see the outcome before he strikes?
Karly chapter 33 . 11/29/2013
I really love your story! Can you please update?
Nyx Nuit chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
So far you did well portraying the turmoil in both of them, though I think Edward seriously has some issues. Your grammar is okay, save for the spelling mistakes and the occasional apostrophe omitted here and there. Phoenix is spelled with an 'o' and the 'i' and the 'a' were misplaced in the spelling of Florida, the two mistakes that really caught my eye.
Sephrenia1 chapter 33 . 9/19/2012
are you "stuck" again and can we expect you to be "back on it" anytime soon ...
Guest chapter 33 . 7/2/2012
Love how he contemplates B or the coven. Her power should come in handy against G
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 33 . 6/28/2012
Whoa, this story, and chapter, is very intense.
I am definitely looking forward to reading additional chapters.
Very well written - keep up the good work.
:)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 30 . 6/28/2012
OMFG! I so did NOT see that one coming... I mean... WOW! Total bummer, hey?
Well written - keep up the good work.
:)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 28 . 6/28/2012
Holy hit, that was hotter than He££! WOW... I like it! ;D
VERY well written - keep up the good work.
:)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 25 . 6/28/2012
Wow, who would have thought that Eddie-boy would be such an insatiable stud-muffin as to have shagged BOTH Peter AND Char to the point that, even though they are all vampires, not a one of the mate pair came out unscathed, aches and pains wise - too funny, I love it! ;D
Well written - keep up the good work.
:)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 23 . 6/28/2012
M.m.m., yummy-yummy-yummy-yummy - I love it! Freaking lucky Bella! ;D
VERY WELL done - keep up the good work.
:)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 18 . 6/28/2012
OMFG, I would so love to be Bella in this situation, you know? She is one freaking lucky lady! ;D
I love all of the deliciously decadent and sexy as all He££ details given of Bella and Jasper's first time together... if only every girl's first time were so sexy and fulfilling, you know? ;D
VERY well written - keep up the good work.
:)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 14 . 6/28/2012
Deliciously detailed lemony goodness - I love how animalistic the passion has been so far - very yummy indeed. ;D
VERY well done - keep up the good work.
:)
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 11 . 6/28/2012
Brilliantly and wonderfully written - love the detailed passionate moments.
VERY well written - keep up the good work.
;D
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 4 . 6/27/2012
YUMMY! Love the details! ;D
VERY well done - keep up the good work.
:)
Sromum chapter 33 . 3/25/2012
Great story and chapters cant wait till u update
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