|Reviews for Open Up Next to You|
| Nicoconsd chapter 21 . 7/14
Wow this story really broke my heart but in a really great way. The anguish of Bella knowing that Edward loved her but had to leave cause he was drawn by something "other" to someone else was wrenching. This was a wonderful journey and I am so excited to read the sequel to see who Bella's mate is! :)
| Anna chapter 22 . 3/17
This is SO not my usual kind of story (actually, i don't think I've ever finished a "surprise nontraditional coupling" story like this before), but you pulled me in and wrote a very convincing and satisfying story here. The characters rang true and the pacing was perfect. Two thumbs up; I look forward to reading the sequel!
| TinaF chapter 20 . 9/8/2015
| Stefanie chapter 20 . 3/5/2015
gotta say, this is one of the sexiest stories in the biz. clever and romantic too...but sexxxxy. whew. love it.
| Stefanie chapter 17 . 3/5/2015
Holy cow! hottest chapter ever...EVERRRRRRRRR!
| Calyptra chapter 21 . 11/28/2014
Am I a bad person because I enjoyed Bronwy'cs insecurities?
it's good to see how Bella affects him and he does not anymore.
he might say that he doesn't know if he would have shaken her hand had he known, but I'm pretty sure he wouldn't. Thinking about the divorce with pain and not liking the thought of other men wouldn't be an issue otherwise.
| Calyptra chapter 20 . 11/28/2014
It kind of makes sense for her to be with them. She was afraid to love Randall, Felix or Garrett (Again, what a shame. I wouldn't have minded a little action with the last one) because they could leave her. Our she could leave them.
Jasper and Alice are already mated. They fell in love after mating, so there is no danger. She feels safe. And they are a damn hot couple.
Wonder if they'd be jealous if she did find a mate. They said they wouldn't, but still.
| Calyptra chapter 14 . 11/28/2014
Damn, I really hoped, something would happen with Garrett. He is one of my favourite
| Calyptra chapter 6 . 11/28/2014
I know it's not Edward's fault, but I think he deserves to have a limb or two removed for not telling her. If she knew they weren't mates, she would have been prepared. Selfish of him.
| Calyptra chapter 2 . 11/28/2014
Dammit, that was good. I liked how Edward is suffering as well. That it is just something he can't avoid. It feels like if he had a choice, he would choose Bella.
I like Bella sharing Alice's name.
| Calyptra chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
I like this Edward more. More playful, at least in the flashbacks.
| JasmineDragon22 chapter 22 . 11/18/2014
Wow what a roller coaster but I loved it!
| sileya chapter 22 . 9/27/2014
| FabinaForever11 chapter 20 . 4/17/2014
| Rel8tivity chapter 2 . 2/11/2014
My friend, ye have slain me. I've always been a Bella/Edward shipper, and that's the worst that could pass: for New Moon to happen again. But this time, with no possibility of a return. Ugh! Well done, LJ! Well done!