|Reviews for Open Up Next to You|
| magmom4 chapter 16 . 6/23
I wish you weren't doing this orgy. To me, it spoils
everything. I would also like to hear what Edward has to say.
| magmom4 chapter 10 . 6/22
I am thinking it isn't only me who doesn't like this pairing.
| magmom4 chapter 8 . 6/22
So you are saying that Edward will not see the error of his ways?
| magmom4 chapter 2 . 6/22
I didn't even finish this chapter when I decided you need to get rid of whatever her name is. Not kill gher off but find a way for them to not be mates and back to Bella.
| crazycats7 chapter 21 . 3/14
I don't like Edward with another mate. He belongs with Bella. I really don't like this story.
| Devora13 chapter 2 . 1/23
Sad but not really. I have always thought these two did not make a perfect match. Bella looks better with someone that has seth's character. More free, not so controlling.
| Freak of a Fangirl chapter 12 . 11/25/2016
Really enjoying this story so far. Although I would like for Edward to not really be mated (maybe it's just Bratwyn's gift to lure in men or something) and then for him to realise what he lost. It would be nice if she was actually mated to Jasper and Alice. My issues with pettiness aside, I love this story. Also super appreciate the Sara Bareilles chapter titles.
| agoogoo chapter 20 . 10/22/2016
Nice. Very nice. Not too fast paced. Yey to the time lapses. Yey that E and B got to be together for 10ish years. Yey to B's growth. I had been scouring the site for a non cliche twifanfic for weeks and even tho the beginning is sorta used, you totes delivered bruh
| agoogoo chapter 3 . 10/21/2016
At least Edward made sure to end things with Bella first. Some Edwards are more assholey and woulda just cheated
| orchidluv chapter 10 . 9/30/2016
Anytime I read of Alistair, I chose to picture Dermot Mulroney with the longer hair (as in Breaking Dawn) just because he is so perfect.
| Nicoconsd chapter 21 . 7/14/2016
Wow this story really broke my heart but in a really great way. The anguish of Bella knowing that Edward loved her but had to leave cause he was drawn by something "other" to someone else was wrenching. This was a wonderful journey and I am so excited to read the sequel to see who Bella's mate is! :)
| Anna chapter 22 . 3/17/2016
This is SO not my usual kind of story (actually, i don't think I've ever finished a "surprise nontraditional coupling" story like this before), but you pulled me in and wrote a very convincing and satisfying story here. The characters rang true and the pacing was perfect. Two thumbs up; I look forward to reading the sequel!
| TinaF chapter 20 . 9/8/2015
| Stefanie chapter 20 . 3/5/2015
gotta say, this is one of the sexiest stories in the biz. clever and romantic too...but sexxxxy. whew. love it.
| Stefanie chapter 17 . 3/5/2015
Holy cow! hottest chapter ever...EVERRRRRRRRR!