Reviews for Rainy Conversation
KrisEleven chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
This was an interesting conversation between the two of these characters. I think you are right, the conversation did work better between Tris and Keth than it would have between Tris and Briar, and you explained his presence in Summersea rather well.

I would have enjoyed the story more all the way through had you gotten a beta to look it over for you. There are quite a few spelling mistakes, including character names, and some incorrect punctuation around dialogue.

The simile between Tris and the storms was well done; I enjoyed that imagery. I really enhjoyed a few of your lines: " I am all for curiosity except when it's aimed at me.", "'It is human nature to fear what we don't understand.'I know this and Keth knows that I know this.", and "'because it was content as it was.'" in particular.

Overall, very good. You didn't write her exactly as I would have pictured her in this situation, but you made her believable and told a good story. Thanks for sharing this with us.

KrisEleven