Tension and humour deftly maintained:-)

GREAT!

Good thing Danny can talk. And was able to in a way over ride the truth serum. Always that he can talk and talk.

Ha! He didn't lie, he repeated Grace's story...which was a lie (right?). Clever Danny.

What kind of ending is chapter two? Who comes up with that? Give me a heart attack why don't you?

This was a serious and funny story altogether. I enjoyed reading it.

Only Danny could hold his own against truth serum. LOL! This was really good, and I liked how it was funny, and then really serious as Danny fought for his life. Embedded trackers? Genius!

Funny story.

I like it! Great story, thank you for writing!

I really liked this one. Cute and intense at the same time. Can't help but be a favorite.

Loved the story- interesting and fun! :D

Congrats and kudos!

Yeah.

You're right about that.

Who talks more?

The green-eyed cop from Long Island?

Or the blue-eyed cop from New Jersey?

Ha! Cute! They all had tracking devices like a pack of doggies! I remember that you mentioned that itch at Danny's hairline in the first chapter. (And it helped that I reread the whole story as I sit here in Library Land waiting for somebody to ask me a question.)

So, Kono and Danny had a bet? What was the forfeit? Did Kono have to buy pizza and beer? Maybe a bottle of Extra Strength Excederin? I think this story requires an epilogue.

Nope, doesn't look like this interrogation is going to be a success. I liked the entrance of the others.

Oooo... NASTY cliff hanger, sis!

Nice work! I like how Danny uses his natural talkativeness to his advantage here. I especially liked him thinking that he could rant about McGarrett all day. Hope the bad guys have comfy chairs available, this could take a while. :-D

I had a couple of favorite parts here, like this one: Still on the floor, Singleton began to laugh, mocking the cops. Steve pounced, savagely ripping the bandage off Singleton's shoulder and out of the startled SWAT officer's hands. Singleton yelled as the pad tore away the scab that had begun to form. Steve shoved the bloody bandage into the mobster's open mouth and used the free ends of the gauze to tie the gag in place.

Steve jabbed a finger in Singleton's face. "Danny dies. You die," the commander snarled. "I don't think anyone here will have a problem with that."

And this part:"He impressed me," the doctor answered, without taking his eyes off Danny. "I've never had a patient lie to me. They evade, twist, dodge. I think of it as a car chase, with me in pursuit of the truth. But Detective Williams slammed on the brakes, looked me in the eye and lied. And laughed while he did it.

I hope that Steve was also impressed, as Danny hasn't had the training that he has had in beating the truth serums.

And of course, the last line: "We don't want to kill you," the SEAL said with an evil grin. "We want you to talk!"

Excellent story! Thank you so much for sharing it with us! :-)