|Reviews for When Lives Collide|
| allietheepic7 chapter 2 . 6/16/2014
please tell my that trinity is the TARDIS b/c Trinity vARDIS
| grimmich chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
why does it seem so hard for a lot of fic writers to let harry look like a man? everyone seems to want to make him pretty or girly what is wrong with a man looking like a man?
| domsijohn chapter 4 . 10/10/2013
| domsijohn chapter 2 . 10/10/2013
so very good
| domsijohn chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
| Lizelda chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
| Ryu Pendragon chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I love cool, sarcastic Harry. It just makes the story more hilarious. Though to be Master of Death it would require self-control. It was just funny how he basically said "Well, I really don't care about the world ending b/c I would live anyway but it would be annoying to be noticed by the demons and angels."
| Tango Dancer chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Sounds interesting! I loved the 'bored' line, it was funny as hell! Anyway... keep up the good job!
| Vicki219 chapter 4 . 10/13/2011
| Rokkis chapter 4 . 10/6/2011
Nope still Mary-Sue as far as I can see.
Good luck though
| Rokkis chapter 2 . 10/6/2011
Isn't Trinity sort of pointless? From cannon we know that Death made the item for the three brothers and Harry has inherited them. I sort of thought that made him his own boss. Why do you need an additional OC? Feels sort... Mary-Sueish.
I'll just keep reading shall I
| TheLonesomeMonster chapter 4 . 10/4/2011
cool story, but I think I would like it better if Harry was a little less cold.
| silverkat87 chapter 4 . 10/3/2011
this is an interesting story however trinity just seems to have too much power and can solve all their problems with a single thought.
I think the story would be much better without trinity and believe you should consider starting over without that character. the story needs problems that are not solved so easily within the chapter (e.g chapter 4 has a trap for castiel and bobby is kidnapped and both of these were resolved within a few paragraphs. you should consider showing more about how the rescue occured and maybe planning of the rescue.) making rescues longer is easier when you dont have a mary sue type character clocking everyone till the last second.
I hope you dont find my review too critical but i think some of you ideas are good but there are somethings that dont appeal to many readers (mary sue's and plots going to fast).
| little-bast chapter 3 . 10/2/2011
Great Chapter...Keep them coming!
I thought they would be heading to Bobby's for the conversation. How will Castiel react to Harry? will know of Harry being a wizard?
I love that they hid the impala.
Looking forward to your next chapter...
Can't wait for the upcoming conversation...
Hoping for an update soon...
| Dark Neko 4000 chapter 2 . 10/1/2011
what going to happen next