|Reviews for I'd Go Through Hell For You|
| Carbon Insolence chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
This is a good story :) I like it. The only problem is you do a lot of this:
"There's not much you can do to me that hasn't been done before. I'm not breaking up with Albus. I love him." James laughed.
This insinuates that its James who's in love with Albus not Lysander so you should write it as:
"There's not much you can do to me that hasn't been done before. I'm not breaking up with Albus. I love him." Lysander said.
or you could leave out the Lysander said and just put James laughed on another line.
It's just it's really confusing :/ other than that it's really good :)
| Lost In The Lies chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
I liked it. Very original. This Chance guy though, you can so hear an underlying story there. I keep wondering what happened there. Anyways, good.
| Charlie932 chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Weird... I mean, it's well written, and a cool idea, but being a twin, twincest really creeps me out. I liked the story though. It's very original. :)