Reviews for LOVELESSxxx
Guest chapter 5 . 10/12/2014
WHY NO MORE? I STAYED UP TILL READING THIS, I NEED AN ENDING. Please, this is the best VNI Fanfic ive ever read!
MeowNyaKanoka chapter 5 . 11/7/2013
No more chapters?
MeowNyaKanoka chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
Hehe. I love how Len's hair just defies gravity... I think that's what makes him cute
Anonymous chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
THIS... IS... AMAZING! TT THE FEELS! _ You really need to update though... It's been two years since you did! And we all really want to read the next part of the story! Please, please,
IhartFF chapter 5 . 1/17/2013
Kyaaah! Please update! Update! Update! Update! What happened to Rinny?! Dont say youre going to kill her?! Please no! Dont kill her! Or i will kill you! And i wish someone save her! Maybe meiko will save her. Please dont let her die! I begged you! And please update this story! Because its been more than a year when you updated this story, though its my first time reading this story, but i love how you write and describe the characters, and also i like how you write this story. Now please update! Update for my sake!
VocaloidIza chapter 5 . 11/18/2012
O.M.G This is so exciting!I just love the GakuLen scene at the begining,CUTE!Best YAOI Vocaloid story I read so far!

I love the KaiLen scenes you did at the begining of the story,BananaIce is just sweet and makes me go "D'awwwwwwww!"

I'm truly curious who that green haired man is from chapter one,the first who came to my mind was Mikuo.I'm really on the edge of my seat!

Please!Please!Pleeeeeeaaaaasssseeeee review!I saw the last update was last year!
Guest chapter 5 . 11/18/2012
Pleeeeeaaaaseeeee Update!;o; I'm so excited to hear the next chapter!
Nilly chapter 5 . 8/3/2012
Good story. Hope you'll update soon.
This will be your 30th review.
Keep up the good work.
Platycloud chapter 5 . 6/16/2012
It appears you haven't updated in forever... But, I will hope for a chapter 6 anyways.
PuffinSunday Muffin chapter 5 . 5/7/2012
I... I HATE YOU! (Please don't take my words seriously!)



You've made me fangirl over and over and over again over that Gakupo-Len scene! I hate you! I fangirled over it since you last updated and is still fangirling over it up until now! What have you done to me! But the thing is, WHY MUST BE THAT PART BE SO SHORT! That scene stuck to my mind for almost five months, completely repeating and repeating itself in my imagination... BUT I DON'T KNOW HOW TO CONTINUE IT! That scene is haunting me!


But I'm not complaining though. Please accept my heartfelt thumbs up. Thank you for writing that scene... even if that scene is so short. I really can't remember how many times I have re-read it... I LOVE THAT PART!

And the way Len is blushing is just so cute!

And oh, I also have to thank you for introducing Hibiki Lui and Ring! If not for this fanfic, I would not have been aware at their existence...

AND... GUMIYA (GUMO) APPEARED! But I forgot to fangirl over his appearance because of the suspense! Really, disregarding the Gakupo-Len scene, this chapter is just so suspenseful and you have really pulled off that suspenseful part of this chapter!


But... why do you have to end it like that? A CLIFF HANGER! ಥಥ ಥಥ ಥಥ Why a cliff hanger? WHYYYYY?

(_) Eh?


OH. Next chapter will go back to Gakupo and Len? And there will be jealous!Gakupo? YATTA!

But... But... *looks at the date updated*




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YOU HAVE NOT YET BEEN UPDATING NOOOOO! Please, update soon! Please?

I want to see more of my cute and adorable Gakupo...
PuffinSunday Muffin chapter 4 . 5/7/2012
That... that Meiko part was... really written greatly! I really like how you had written that part! It was so suspenseful!

And now Len is Kaito and Gakupo's servant!

/A little way away, Gakupo could be heard hacking through stacks of hay with his silvery sword. / ಥಥ ಥಥ ಥಥ It hurts me that it is possible that Gakupo is actually imagining to be slashing REAL people while doing this... ಥಥ Why, oh, why! Gakupo!

And once again your projection of Len's character greatly mesmerized me! I really love it how you are projecting his maturity!

And... I admit it shocked me how emotionally attached Kaito is to Len... I mean, they just met! But I guess, as of now, Kaito's more physically attracted to Len? But I guess not. I mean, it looks like as if he is going mad because of his feelings for Len... (Although I honestly can't wait to see Kaito and Gakupo's feelings for Len to develop! A)

But... Kaito was not able to control himself? And now... Len ois mad at him... Poor Guy. :"C

And... /The moment she disappeared, Kaito smashed his head against the wall.

"BAKA!"/ THIS. Is it really bad that I genuinely enjoyed that part?

And looks like Len... also got shocked when he said, "Kiss me again." We have the same reaction! XD I was really shocked when I read that Len said that! (Even if it is out of anger, that unfinished statement is still suggestive! Looks like Len should be thankful that it is Kaito that he directed those words at... Because if it was Gakupo instead,... Len's life would... be w A LIVING HELL!) And... NOOOO! Len's life is in danger!
PuffinSunday Muffin chapter 3 . 5/7/2012
Looks like Meiko is going to arrive soon! Poor Kaito though... Looks like fate doesn't like him that much...

And I must really say this. I really love how you had projected Len's character in this story! Especially his wit, calmness, and maturity! Its really hard to find a story with these aspects of Len's character being pinned down and projected well. I might say, I fell in love with the way you had depicted him here... that whenever I imagine this story, I don't have any doubts left why Kaito and Gakupo fell (will fall) in love with him...

And the best thing is that you had not over-done your projection of his character! :"D You have really been doing a good job with Len's characterization! You've made his character subtly stand-out here! (As well, as the well the characters with brief appearances such as Miki, Piko, Iroha, Rin, and Gumi...)

Although I think there's something more to do with Kaito and Gakupo's characters here...

And Len is just so cute during that Piko-Len moment! Looks like Len knows how to use his looks! (Oh my Len!)

And Len... Len's harbouring attractions towards Kaito and Gakupo? And he's even thinking of it openly!

And... Really? O_O Teto's character and role here really... FRIGHTENED ME! I never saw that coming!

But... Kaito..., Green Tea is delicious! And Gakupo's thoughts about his katana... bothered me... O_O

/"I'd like..." Gumi blushed a pale shade of pink. "I'd like Rin, if that's okay."/ :D Someone's in love!

Uwaaaa! Kaito and Gakupo both like Len (as a servant)! *trows confetti around*

And poor Kaito... but this is such an enjoyable chapter! :"D
PuffinSunday Muffin chapter 2 . 5/7/2012
Heheheheh... I really like your writing style! Your writing is really pulling me in to this story more!

And the way Gakupo and Gumi met Len was just so funny! Their disoriented reactions and slow mind processing in that moment really made me laugh! And Miki! You've made me like Miki! I really like your depiction of her character here! Its funny how whinny and idiotic she is here!

And the Kaito and Len's screams are just so cuuuutttteeee!

And... /-"...Sup." Kaito said finally, grinning sheepishly.-/ This. What an awesome moment! *ᵜ*

And I like it how physically clingy Kaito is to Len... I think its a little disrespectful to Len since hey just met... but..., I have no complaints though. You have my blessings, Kaito.

I also like the way you are projecting Gakupo's character here! Although I think there is something lacking in Gakupo's character here though... :"C But I cannot lay my finger into it as of now... And... I think Gakupo likes to admire flowers though. Although I'm a little interested on his background character...

But still... Gakupo is acting like a stalker in here! XD JOKE! I mean, he keeps on watching Len like some teenager who had just first seen their crush...

And... /-"So, Len...-kun, you're the girl Miki's been telling me so much about," Gumi began, shifting closer to Len as she spoke.-/ Is it just my imagination or Gumi knows Len's real gender?

And... is that GumiXRin I am sensing to come!

And this chapter is just so funny and cute! Miki is really amazing me in here!
PuffinSunday Muffin chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Before I say anything else, I've got to say this: THIS CHAPTER IS JUST SO CUTE!

Well, anyway. *coughs* The start of this fic is intriguing and dark... and well, I think I can definitely connect it to the "Servant of Evil"? But at the mention of the 'green-haired man'... just who in the world is him? Mikuo? Gumiya? Or... Or... ** Or... A GROWN UP GACHAPOID? (But hey! I think the idea of a grown up Gachapoid as an antagonist is not that much of a bad idea!)

And a woman with a golder hair... Hmmmm... let's see? Maybe it was Lily? Or... is it SeeU? (Oh please no! Not SeeU!)

And this green-haired guy will have Len? For what? As a sacrifice? Or... maybe, to an extent, in a romantic way?

Your itroduction of Kaito and Gakupo's characters are really cute! And I guess, I got a little shocked that Kaito is supposed to marry? And I really like it how you made Gakupo and Gumi are siblings here! I really love their brother-sister relationship!

And I really like it how Len's appearance here exactly resembles Lovelessxxx!Len! Although I would like to ask, why the cat ears? And the way Kaito and Len met is just so cuuuuutttteee~ Looks like Kaito is now having attractions towards Len? ʘ‿ʘ

I really enjoyed the KaiLen scenes here! Those scenes are just so cuuuttteee~

PS. I'm so sorry for not reviewing earlier! :"CCC ಥಥ ಥಥ ಥಥ Please don't get mad at the wimpy me!
FieryEnblem chapter 5 . 3/15/2012
awesome, please update soon!
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